Hey how's it going guys?
I only just found out this site existed a little while ago and have posted a few chapters onto this site. I would really appreciate feedback and/ or critique on absolutely anything.
It's an isekai fantasy with a female lead with a lesbian harem-esque situation. Though the core of the story is about fate and identity as the main character struggles to not be changed by the title, and the burden placed on her shoulders.
Also, if no one is interested in taking a look at the chapters, I would still love if anyone could take a look at my blurb and rate/ critique it for me as I've always felt like my blurbs aren't up to par.
I only just found out this site existed a little while ago and have posted a few chapters onto this site. I would really appreciate feedback and/ or critique on absolutely anything.
It's an isekai fantasy with a female lead with a lesbian harem-esque situation. Though the core of the story is about fate and identity as the main character struggles to not be changed by the title, and the burden placed on her shoulders.
Also, if no one is interested in taking a look at the chapters, I would still love if anyone could take a look at my blurb and rate/ critique it for me as I've always felt like my blurbs aren't up to par.
On the precipice of confessing to the man of her dreams, Eve is taken by a light. Imagine another world swallowing you up against your will, and eroding who you are; that it demands a life from you so contrary to your previous one. In this world, Eve has forced upon her, the title of "Zeroth." Her whole world, and that of many others' , changes- destined to fall into madness. Now in a new world with responsibilities that make no sense to her, it is her newfound "friends" that she has to rely on to stay sane and be the hero she does not desire, but the one they need.
Except, bit by bit, they all lose sight of who she is, seeing only the hero "Zero" in front of them. Fate has a wicked sense of humor as Eve's life comes unraveled.
Is Eve destined to be the hero she is not? Or will she let the title she bares consume her, distorting her into another? And will her past help define her future. This is the tale of her struggles, and a star-crossed love destined by Fate to never converge. This is the tale of Zero.
Except, bit by bit, they all lose sight of who she is, seeing only the hero "Zero" in front of them. Fate has a wicked sense of humor as Eve's life comes unraveled.
Is Eve destined to be the hero she is not? Or will she let the title she bares consume her, distorting her into another? And will her past help define her future. This is the tale of her struggles, and a star-crossed love destined by Fate to never converge. This is the tale of Zero.