Lf brutal destruction of my novel

[DearDire]

I’m looking for brutally honest feedback on my gimmick novel. You can say whatever you want, I have thick skin.

Ten chapters are currently out and I feel like the story has gone nowhere (take that as you will)

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1672171/how-to-ruin-a-dark-fantasy-gacha--litrpg/

 

[RepresentingEnvy]

The character illustrations are broken in your first published chapter.

 

[JayMark]

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[DearDire]

The character illustrations are broken in your first published chapter.

damn it… no one ever told me
I hope it works now

 

[Valmond]

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