Bitter-Enigma
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Hey there,
As the title says, I am looking for a Beta reader to give my story a go.
Summary: The story follows a young, small-statured pickpocket as he gets caught up in a world of the supernatural, with him becoming an agent of Chaos whilst taking advantage and struggling with his supernatural afflictions. It’s a story about an often overlooked and underestimated man as he claws his way to total dominance.
(Dude gets Vampire/Werewolf/Mage/Demon essence in his system over time)
-Slow burn: No instant Chad by chapter 4.
-Elements of Littrpg.
-Cursewords.
-Adult/NSFW scenes are placed into smaller side chapters (Example: So alongside normal chapter 12, you get a NSFW filled chapter 12A), allowing a reader to skip those without fear of missing out on the plot/not wanting to see a particular scene.
-Male lead.
I’ve currently got 16 Chapters ready, all between 1000 and 2000 words. I haven’t uploaded it here, yet because I wanted an opinion on it before hand. So, I’ve got it all in a Google doc document.
I’m mostly looking for a fresh set of eyes on this. Is it entertaining? Is the writing decent? Things you like/hate, etc. I’m fairly confident in what I have written thus far, but I don’t have anyone in my immediate circle to give it a read (Seeing as it contains NSFW scenes).
The link below contains a few chapters to give a glimpse of what to expect.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16eGzAqmYsYk-w6-VGWXg2dA7jpHk3Nar?usp=share_link
I'm willing to swap!
As the title says, I am looking for a Beta reader to give my story a go.
Summary: The story follows a young, small-statured pickpocket as he gets caught up in a world of the supernatural, with him becoming an agent of Chaos whilst taking advantage and struggling with his supernatural afflictions. It’s a story about an often overlooked and underestimated man as he claws his way to total dominance.
(Dude gets Vampire/Werewolf/Mage/Demon essence in his system over time)
-Slow burn: No instant Chad by chapter 4.
-Elements of Littrpg.
-Cursewords.
-Adult/NSFW scenes are placed into smaller side chapters (Example: So alongside normal chapter 12, you get a NSFW filled chapter 12A), allowing a reader to skip those without fear of missing out on the plot/not wanting to see a particular scene.
-Male lead.
I’ve currently got 16 Chapters ready, all between 1000 and 2000 words. I haven’t uploaded it here, yet because I wanted an opinion on it before hand. So, I’ve got it all in a Google doc document.
I’m mostly looking for a fresh set of eyes on this. Is it entertaining? Is the writing decent? Things you like/hate, etc. I’m fairly confident in what I have written thus far, but I don’t have anyone in my immediate circle to give it a read (Seeing as it contains NSFW scenes).
The link below contains a few chapters to give a glimpse of what to expect.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16eGzAqmYsYk-w6-VGWXg2dA7jpHk3Nar?usp=share_link
I'm willing to swap!
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