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Hi :)
So, recently, I've finished a book. It was a simple, but fun one, and I got a few, but absolutely amazing readers from this book. So I want to write more, and I want to give them my best! But I can't ask them to be my beta readers, because I want these few people to enjoy the story, not work for it. Is anyone there willing to read my prologue (and perhaps a little more?) and answer a few questions, and give an opinion on it? More about the book below! :D
Genres: action, fantasy, power fantasy, drama, gore. It does NOT contain sexually explicit scenes, and I believe extreme violence shall be the most triggering thing about the story.
Story: It's about an amnesiac boy in a magic school, but he does NOT want his memories back, and instead of a principal, the school is led by a council of mages with conflicting interests... and, perhaps, different plans for the mysterious, but powerful boy? (not the actual synopsis, haven't written one yet '-')
Thank you!
So, recently, I've finished a book. It was a simple, but fun one, and I got a few, but absolutely amazing readers from this book. So I want to write more, and I want to give them my best! But I can't ask them to be my beta readers, because I want these few people to enjoy the story, not work for it. Is anyone there willing to read my prologue (and perhaps a little more?) and answer a few questions, and give an opinion on it? More about the book below! :D
Genres: action, fantasy, power fantasy, drama, gore. It does NOT contain sexually explicit scenes, and I believe extreme violence shall be the most triggering thing about the story.
Story: It's about an amnesiac boy in a magic school, but he does NOT want his memories back, and instead of a principal, the school is led by a council of mages with conflicting interests... and, perhaps, different plans for the mysterious, but powerful boy? (not the actual synopsis, haven't written one yet '-')
Thank you!