Looking for critiques/reviews willing to do same

Spoopytagedie

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I'm a newbie author and my story just reached chapter six including the introduction and I'd like some opinions.

Honestly I dont even care about the review just lookin for someone to tell me what could use some improving. Anyways anyone who can give me advice I'll go ahead and review and rate your story as long as you post along with what could use some improving in my story.

Anyways heres the link

 
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I could help 'ya!

Should I put the feedback on reviews, or do I write it on a message?
 
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Done with my review! Hopefully, you get something from it! :LOL:
 

Sii

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I'm new here but I'll give your novel a read.
 

ChronicleCrawler

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I'm a newbie author and my story just reached chapter six including the introduction and I'd like some opinions.

Honestly I dont even care about the review just lookin for someone to tell me what could use some improving. Anyways anyone who can give me advice I'll go ahead and review and rate your story as long as you post along with what could use some improving in my story.

Anyways heres the link

I'll help...soon. Mehehe :blob_uwu:
 
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