Looking for feedback for my story about an omnipotent god?

MountTaiUnleashed

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So how does one go about writing a story about a god that's all powerful without making it boring? Well here's my attempt.


This is the second story I have written so I'm still new to writing. Any feedback at all would be appreciated :)
 
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