rustgoblin32
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hey! I could really use feedback on my alternate history story im writing. its only 3 chapters right now so it should be a relatively quick read.
technical feedback on things like grammar, spelling, etc is ok, im thankful for any type of feedback whatsoever so in the end its your choice. but i would prefer more feedback on it story wise. review it as a reader, not an author if that makes sense.
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technical feedback on things like grammar, spelling, etc is ok, im thankful for any type of feedback whatsoever so in the end its your choice. but i would prefer more feedback on it story wise. review it as a reader, not an author if that makes sense.
From The Ashes
this is an alternate history story spanning over 100 years of history and the people who live through it. the main point of divergence from our timeline is the USA falls into civil war in 1969. (basic description i know, this is my first story go easy on me) (follow my account...
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