clover2218
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My new series is out, but I'm lacking a synopsis with a proper punch. I'm no good at writing them. Here are the few versions of the synopsis I cooked up...
1. Chitra lived in a world of darkness. Life in that darkness was mundane and content until an accident lit a desire in her heart.
A desire for the light she never cared much about before, a desire that was supposed to be hopeless.
Finitum, a unique full dive VRMMORPG, gave her that opportunity, a chance to fulfil her desire, to bloom a spark of light in her world of darkness.
But was Finitum really a simple game as she and the rest of the world believed? Or was there something more to it?
2. Chitra blamed herself. Her carelessness, her foolishness and her inability, they were the cause of her mother’s accident, that’s what she believed. If only she could see it, then maybe…
But she knew that was impossible. The world of darkness was her cage, a cage she couldn’t break. At least, that was what she believed until she was introduced to Finitum, the unique full dive VRMMORPG that was taking the world by storm. There, a new life, a new light bloomed for her.
But was Finitum really a simple game as she and the rest of the world believed? Or was there something more to it?
3. This is the story of Chitra. A girl born blind, living her life in a world of darkness. This is a story of her and Finitum. The unique full dive VRMMORPG that brought a new beginning to her life, brought her new meetings, partings, emotions and adventure. A game that made light bloom in her dark world.
Join her in her journeys through the mysterious and magic-filled game that changed her life! The game…
The game...
Is Finitum really just a simple game? (this is the one I'm using right now)
4. (This is suggested by Nahrenne. I like it the most, but if it could be even better...)
Chitra, a girl born void of sight, existing without knowing light.
Finitum, a unique full dive VRMMORPG that's the latest craze around the world.
Together, a new story is born. One of new meetings, partings, emotions, adventure and - most important of all - of a shining world full of colour and life.
Follow Chitra on her journey of magic and mystery within the game.
However, can things really be so simple?
...
Welcome to Finitum!
These are all that I have. I'm looking for a sense of danger and atmosphere, also to raise the stakes a bit to make it more interesting. Feel free to ask me anything you need to know about the story if you're willing to help me improve it...
And for the last bit, here's the link to my story. Can't end it without that, can I???
1. Chitra lived in a world of darkness. Life in that darkness was mundane and content until an accident lit a desire in her heart.
A desire for the light she never cared much about before, a desire that was supposed to be hopeless.
Finitum, a unique full dive VRMMORPG, gave her that opportunity, a chance to fulfil her desire, to bloom a spark of light in her world of darkness.
But was Finitum really a simple game as she and the rest of the world believed? Or was there something more to it?
2. Chitra blamed herself. Her carelessness, her foolishness and her inability, they were the cause of her mother’s accident, that’s what she believed. If only she could see it, then maybe…
But she knew that was impossible. The world of darkness was her cage, a cage she couldn’t break. At least, that was what she believed until she was introduced to Finitum, the unique full dive VRMMORPG that was taking the world by storm. There, a new life, a new light bloomed for her.
But was Finitum really a simple game as she and the rest of the world believed? Or was there something more to it?
3. This is the story of Chitra. A girl born blind, living her life in a world of darkness. This is a story of her and Finitum. The unique full dive VRMMORPG that brought a new beginning to her life, brought her new meetings, partings, emotions and adventure. A game that made light bloom in her dark world.
Join her in her journeys through the mysterious and magic-filled game that changed her life! The game…
The game...
Is Finitum really just a simple game? (this is the one I'm using right now)
4. (This is suggested by Nahrenne. I like it the most, but if it could be even better...)
Chitra, a girl born void of sight, existing without knowing light.
Finitum, a unique full dive VRMMORPG that's the latest craze around the world.
Together, a new story is born. One of new meetings, partings, emotions, adventure and - most important of all - of a shining world full of colour and life.
Follow Chitra on her journey of magic and mystery within the game.
However, can things really be so simple?
...
Welcome to Finitum!
These are all that I have. I'm looking for a sense of danger and atmosphere, also to raise the stakes a bit to make it more interesting. Feel free to ask me anything you need to know about the story if you're willing to help me improve it...
And for the last bit, here's the link to my story. Can't end it without that, can I???