Cipiteca396
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Bad writing. If all of the problems were solved before you got there, the MC wouldn't have anything to do. Alternatively, if the problems were so difficult that there was no solution, the MC would simply be powerless and have nothing to do.They possess Anger, Frustration, and contempt for the Nobility— YET WHY NO REVOLUTION? NO COUPS? NO QUESTIONS?
Is it because Loyalty? Honor? FEAR? And most of those principles and qualities of the 'Knight' or in other words, a 'Model Subject' for the crown and their respective lords.
Please answer me (I'm sleep-deprive and I want answers), This is very Important for a Novel that I'm currently planning.
So, you need a problem that's easy to solve, something that the MC can fix with little effort... Like a shitty political landscape with weak, corrupted nobles and hungry, resentful peasants. It's purely a matter of convenience for the author, or wish fulfillment where they are imagining all the shitty people they know in real life.
Normally, it would be difficult for the situation to become so bad that revolution is necessary. A corrupt noble might get lynched by his followers, but those people aren't then going to start an entirely new government and declare war against the king. The immediate problem is solved, so there's nothing else to worry about.
Alternatively, if people are suffering, making other people suffer too isn't usually a viable solution. That kind of resentment can occur, but there won't be any motivation for a full scale revolution. Instead, the people with the will to lead something like that will try to solve their problems directly. 'If I can use magic, and people are starving, I'll use magic to make food.' It's easier that way.
Revolution is a last resort. Crimes like corruption will be punished within the bounds of the law or tolerated as long as possible. Difficulties will be endured with the hope that things will improve tomorrow. Oppression and despair feel impossible to defeat, so you don't even try. A trapped rat is the most vicious, but it's extremely difficult to back a rat into a corner, you know?