Might I interest you with my story; Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son. Feedback would be much appreciated.

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Might I interest you with my story; Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son

Synopsis: I was a novel reader transferred to another world. I'm a minor villain, but my beating was already over.

With that my peaceful life awaits... or so I thought.

[Author](https://www.wattpad.com/user/Nezothecat)

[Chapter 1](https://www.wattpad.com/899130329-transmigrated-into-a-noble%27s-beaten-son-chapter-1/page/2)

[Prologue](https://www.wattpad.com/894432480)

 

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Welcome! Oh, you still have Wattpad? Wattpad banned me 😇
 

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@Nezothecat, I read the first chapter. Seems promising. Btw, transmigration means leaving the original body behind while transported to x means the character brings and retains the original body.

Before @K5Rakitan shared her ban story previously, I vaguely thought wattpad was either a den of plagiarists or just another bot dumping ground.

wattpad = voltpad × amperepad
 
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@Nezothecat, I read the first chapter. Seems promising. Btw, transmigration means leaving the original body behind while transported to x means the character brings and retains the original body.

Before @K5Rakitan shared her ban story previously, I vaguely thought wattpad was either a den of plagiarists or just another bot dumping ground.

wattpad = voltpad × amperepad
Thank you the meaning seems the same from the google search
 

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Thank you the meaning seems the same from the google search
Hmm, perhaps you're one of those that deems it safe to use a thesaurus as is, huh?

Transmigration:
Character A gets into an accident, goes into a coma. Soul A transmigrates into Body B in another world. Soul B already expired. Soul A might or might not go back to original world later, waking character A from the coma.

Sometimes, nothing is written about Body A.

Sometimes, Body A expires or is destroyed during the process. Transmigration is differentiated from reincarnation in that Soul A does not go through the cycle of death and rebirth. It just gets relocated to a different body in another world.

If the relocation is not a passive act, then it is considered Body Possession.

Transported to Another World:
Character C gets summoned to another world. Character C usually gets commissioned to become a hero of that world. Might or might not be able to go back to original world.
 

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Hmm, perhaps you're one of those that deems it safe to use a thesaurus as is, huh?

Transmigration:
Character A gets into an accident, goes into a coma. Soul A transmigrates into Body B in another world. Soul B already expired. Soul A might or might not go back to original world later, waking character A from the coma.

Sometimes, nothing is written about Body A.

Sometimes, Body A expires or is destroyed during the process. Transmigration is differentiated from reincarnation in that Soul A does not go through the cycle of death and rebirth. It just gets relocated to a different body in another world.

If the relocation is not a passive act, then it is considered Body Possession.

Transported to Another World:
Character C gets summoned to another world. Character C usually gets commissioned to become a hero of that world. Might or might not be able to go back to original world.
Ah yes, I used transmigration because of the novels I've read about it and from the google search.

Btw I meant no sarcasm or bad intention with my 1st reply.
 

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Ah yes, I used transmigration because of the novels I've read about it and from the google search.

Btw I meant no sarcasm or bad intention with my 1st reply.
Yes, I kind of assumed there wasn't any or I wouldn't have bothered expounding. Since you're an aspiring author, I was just warning you about the pitfall regarding synonyms. For example, the synonyms of wedge are antonyms of each other.

Also, language evolves and devolves over time.

Before, it was just male/female and unspecified if there is leeway for respecting privacy. Being intersex was a difficult reality.

Now, we have what, fifty or so choices?

We lost our tails, but we gained tentacles!


Examples of devolution:
  • I know, right?
  • not unless
  • anyways
  • ... (misusing & abusing punctuation marks)
Some authors can't even be bothered to properly spell and capitalize the titles of their novels.
 

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Yes, I kind of assumed there wasn't any or I wouldn't have bothered expounding. Since you're an aspiring author, I was just warning you about the pitfall regarding synonyms. For example, the synonyms of the wedge are antonyms of each other.

Also, language evolves and devolves over time.

Before, it was just male/female and unspecified if there is leeway for respecting privacy. Being intersex was a difficult reality.

Now, we have what, fifty or so choices?

We lost our tails, but we gained tentacles!


Examples of devolution:
  • I know, right?
  • not unless
  • anyways
  • ... (misusing & abusing punctuation marks)
Some authors can't even be bothered to properly spell and capitalize the titles of their novels.

Thank you for this. I will always keep this on my mind. It is really hard to write but for some reason, all jobs are hard but I guess writing is fun.

If you have time please continue reading the following chapters. Any comments are always welcome and we are taking it as lessons and guide to further enhance other chapters.
 

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What did you do to achieve that? :blob_blank:
probably dissed on one of the "poor girl meets rich/mysterious/handsome/secretive/shy/cute/alien/cancer-ridden (pick 2) CEO/werewolf/vampire/guy-next-door/childhood crush/transfer student/european tourist (pick 2)" among thousands and pissed off the wrong group

Before @K5Rakitan shared her ban story previously, I vaguely thought wattpad was either a den of plagiarists or just another bot dumping ground.
it essentially still is. you have absolutely no clue how strong the twilight copies are still going DESPITE falling out of popular culture since the Great Depression
 

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What did you do to achieve that? :blob_blank:
They said "banned content" but never got specific.
My guess is that a religious group got pissed off with my subject matter and did a mass report.

probably dissed on one of the "poor girl meets rich/mysterious/handsome/secretive/shy/cute/alien/cancer-ridden (pick 2) CEO/werewolf/vampire/guy-next-door/childhood crush/transfer student/european tourist (pick 2)" among thousands and pissed off the wrong group
I tend not to diss other stories no matter how lame they are. I usually say something like, "Oh, classic!" and move on to something more interesting. Also, I do most of my reading on writing.com because of their gift point system, so not much time to read Wattpad stories. However, I did inspire one author before I got banned:
 

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They said "banned content" but never got specific.
My guess is that a religious group got pissed off with my subject matter and did a mass report.


I tend not to diss other stories no matter how lame they are. I usually say something like, "Oh, classic!" and move on to something more interesting. Also, I do most of my reading on writing.com because of their gift point system, so not much time to read Wattpad stories. However, I did inspire one author before I got banned:

Hahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, I always say Americans are only a few steps away from being little better than the Taliban. Reported by the religious nutjobs. :blobrofl:
 

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Chapter 2 is out

If you have free time, kindly read my story. I'll update it every week.


Title: Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son


Synopsis: I was a novel reader transferred to another world. I'm a minor villain, but my beating was already over.


With that my peaceful life awaits... or so I thought.






 

Nezothecat

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Chapter 3 is out

If you have free time, kindly read my story. I'll update it every week.


Title: Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son


Synopsis: I was a novel reader transferred to another world. I'm a minor villain, but my beating was already over.


With that my peaceful life awaits... or so I thought.

https://nezothecat.wordpress.com/


https://mobile.twitter.com/NeZotheCat


https://www.wattpad.com/904170760-transmigrated-into-a-noble's-beaten-son-chapter-3


 

Nezothecat

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If you have free time, kindly read my story. I'll update it every week.


Title: Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son


Might I interest you with my story; Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son


Synopsis: I was a novel reader transferred to another world. I'm a minor villain, but my beating was already over.


With that my peaceful life awaits... or so I thought.


https://www.wattpad.com/user/Nezothecat


https://www.scribblehub.com/read/131121-transmigrated-into-a-nobles-beaten-son/chapter/131126/


https://nezothecat.wordpress.com/


https://mobile.twitter.com/NeZotheCat


https://m.facebook.com/ne.zo.3998?ref=bookmarks


 
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