Wohendum-Bluu
When Blue Just Isn't Quite Blue Enough
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I had a story posted here, S.H.A.D.E., but I became dissatisfied with it and have begun to rewrite it. It was well-received more often than not, though I suspect that's true of most fiction on here. It's taken me a few weeks but I have rewritten the whole thing almost, though a lot of the plot has been altered and since I was hiatus for months, I don't expect anyone to remember much about it and thats also good in a way. I need someone who will read it. Grammar might not be top-notch since I'm not certain what could be considered top-notch grammar in the first place. I do however want opinions on the plot and on the characters in general.
I'm thinking I won't get many responses due to me tacking up that "40k Words" statement but I'm hoping someone will respond anyway. Thanks again if so, and if not, oh well I tried. Also, if anyone accepts, the writing will be provided via a site called writerfeedpad.com.
I'm thinking I won't get many responses due to me tacking up that "40k Words" statement but I'm hoping someone will respond anyway. Thanks again if so, and if not, oh well I tried. Also, if anyone accepts, the writing will be provided via a site called writerfeedpad.com.
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