Lloyd
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Hello! I have never been satisfied with my first chapter of 'The Sovereign Gamer', however i didn't want to spend weeks or months on it like i sometimes do with a new story. The result ended up being a little generic in my opinion, however im now having a blast writing the current chapters. Any feedback on chapter one would be appreciated so i can know which direction to go with my rewrites.
The Sovereign Gamer
Joshua just wanted to game in peace, but then he was transported into another world and given the mission to defeat the Demon Lord. After meeting with a beautiful girl he ends up founding his own Kingdom and begins taking on a series of dungeon diving expeditions to level up...
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