Need feedback on Glorymonger: A Story of Violence & Family

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I don't care if no one's ever gonna see this post, lol. But if I do stand corrected, please let me know what you think of my revamped story. It's only two chapters because I'm still editing chapters 3-7. I will ask for more feedback once I've polished them, though.
 
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