Need feedback on my story

Sager

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Ok so my comments section is all commands soo I don't really know if you guys like where the story is going
I've never tried this type of thing before so I kinda really need feed back to know what works!
 

S.D.Mills

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I do workshops for writers in the Scribble Hub Discord server. Most of my feedback style requires back and forth communication, so it's hard to do it in a forum. Feel free to hit me up.

Discord Server link: discordapp.com/invite/vpxWXQd
My Discord username: night0w1
 

MrMark

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Love how the the story is currently progressing by far your doing your doing great friend ☺
 

Rollerrex

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Love how the the story is currently progressing by far. Keep it up!
 

Tojara

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Does someone remember where did Kath get a seed of a world tree?
 

Sager

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That would have been nice


I just wonder how a world tree would end the world.
The world tree lead to what was basically this worlds version of world war 1
The main person responsible for this is the fourth tumor: human dictator.
If the world tree were to ever sprout again it would lead to world war 2.
 
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