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AkalE

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I you have a story that you want reviewed or need feedback. Post them below. Don't be shy now...

But do let me know a few things -
1.) Do you want an honest review or a motivational review
2.) Do you want me to DM or a public review.

Offer lasts until motivation remains. Hurry!



Queue:
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5. caninstinct/
6. the-ultimate-system-wielder/
7. transmigrated-into-a-nobles-beaten-son/
8. crash-landing/
9. The Nephlim Trilogy
10. black-dragon-god-wants-to-go-to-earth/
11. Isekai Inc.
12. F:Ran
13. Destruction Angel Summoned From Being Dead For 500 Years Finds Love
14. The Lone Macaw
15. Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!
16. The Devil’s Tears
17. Conversion
18. Re-Phantasia: Thriving in a Fantasy World
19. Transmigrated Into Another World: Aim to be the Noblewoman’s Butler
20. The Shaman Queen
21. Masquerade of Souls
22. Reborn as a Symbiote
23. Phantom Ddraig
24. Ragnarok in Another World
25. The Tyrant Duchess
26. Assassins and Generals
27. Warfare Between Lost Hearts
28. The Courting of Life and Death
 
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K5Rakitan

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Sounds great!
I'll take the harshest review you can give, and please give me a one-star rating, too <3
 

AkalE

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Sounds great!
I'll take the harshest review you can give, and please give me a one-star rating, too <3
I haven't watched/ read Yu-Gi-Oh! sorry. Also, consider putting a fan-fic tag.
Bye~
 

Assurbanipal_II

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I would be interested in your opinion. :blob_reach: Honest, but private, please. Just click on the banner below. It is the upper story.
 

BenJepheneT

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I'LL TAKE IT. PLEASE. I WANT IT TO BE DREADFULLY HONEST AND I DON'T CARE WHETHER IT'S THROUGH DM OR PUBLIC. I JUST NEED A TRUTHFUL AND IF POSSIBLE, PAINFUL OPINION OF MY STORY. THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.
 

ChronicleCrawler

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Mine too, please. An honest and private one. Thanks very much.
 

Assurbanipal_II

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Mine too, please. An honest and private one. Thanks very much.

That reminds me ... I have to read a chapter. :blob_hmm:
 

Roseuwuowo

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Can you give me an honest and public review? I would appreciate that!


Any feedback would be good :D
 

GhostlyArtz

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I currently have my story set for daily updates until I catch up to my current chapter (so until the 24th) but an honest review would be amazing when/if you are able to get to it:
(The long version can be found here)
It can be private or public- I am just trying to figure out what works/doesn't work, if anything is confusing or needs clarification, or anything that I can improve on.

Either weay! You are doing a wonderful thing and I'm sure everyone appreciates you :)
 

D.C.Haenlien

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I'll bite. Hopefully my writing is decent enough, if you still have the motivation for an honest review.

 
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Goswick

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I would love a review if you're still doing them!

 

thedude3445

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Dang I was too late for this one when the queue is ten stories long so I won't even try, but you should review Isekai Inc. for sure
 

Nerothemajin

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If you have time please review.
F:Ran

As the big bang emerged, stars fell on the earth and the dust that those stars contained created life as we know it. Humans decided to use this energy, as they found it very compatible with the human's physical capabilities.They named it Saku energy.
As time passed, it became a strong weapon that was used by all swordsmen.
Ran was a boy with a great dream-- one of becoming a strong swordsman.
Being born with a weak body however, made him insecure.
Yet after coming to Tsurugi Academy the academy of his dreams, he will learn his true limits, and with the help of his friends, he will be able to over come them.
But as in all great stories, things aren't that simple.
And many mysteries await.

 

Bugi

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I you have a story that you want reviewed or need feedback. Post them below. Don't be shy now...

But do let me know a few things -
1.) Do you want an honest review or a motivational review
2.) Do you want me to DM or a public review.

Offer lasts until motivation remains. Hurry!



Queue:
1. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/102028/i-wont-destroy-the-world/
2. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/110930/kaibas-prostitute/
3. Assurbanipal_II fiction
4. <>
5. caninstinct/
6. the-ultimate-system-wielder/
7. transmigrated-into-a-nobles-beaten-son/
8. crash-landing/
9. The Nephlim Trilogy
10. black-dragon-god-wants-to-go-to-earth/
11. Isekai Inc.
12.Destruction Angel Summoned From Being Dead For 500 Years Finds Love
Please review mine...
 
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