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[AkalE]

Caninstinct

Shiro believes he's been sent to the wrong school. Rormund Academy: home to only the best of the best. A school so exclusive even its name remains elusive to the public. An establishment where only the wealthiest, smartest, and most athletic students of the world reside. Shiro exhibits none of...

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I'LL TAKE IT. PLEASE. I WANT IT TO BE DREADFULLY HONEST AND I DON'T CARE WHETHER IT'S THROUGH DM OR PUBLIC. I JUST NEED A TRUTHFUL AND IF POSSIBLE, PAINFUL OPINION OF MY STORY. THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.

Done. It's quite well done... Especially considering it's not in the usual vein of books on this site. All the best!
:)

 

[AkalE]

Dang I was too late for this one when the queue is ten stories long so I won't even try, but you should review Isekai Inc. for sure

SMH. You should have just linked it :P
Now there are more books lined before its turn comes...

 

[thedude3445]

SMH. You should have just linked it :P
Now there are more books lined before its turn comes...

Eh it's OK, those people deserve reviews more!

 

[BenJepheneT]

Done. It's quite well done... Especially considering it's not in the usual vein of books on this site. All the best!
:)

Eic thanks here my man have some love

 

[VMJaskiernia]

The Courting of Life and Death

Clandestina is a realm of secrets, fairies, and dark magics. Among the nobles there is talk of a goddess of death, and a forbidden magic she grants to those that follow her-- cræft that can heal injuries that should be fatal or even bring back the dead. But she...

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I'd love a review :) Public is great (have no reviews here yet), and maybe a bit more motivational, but certainly honest.

 

[LostLibrarian]

The Lone Macaw

The moment the dying Aki opens his eyes, he is shocked. Not his hospice room but green meadows, blue sky and the villages of his favorite MMO await him. A fever dream? Or a new lease of life? To Aki it’s a chance to correct the story line he...

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I would also take an honest review... at least if its better than 1 Star :D

 

[Vickusoftears]

I am open to an honest and public review. I really want feedback on my premise etc. so I can improve as a writer. I am posting another thread looking for an editor so yeah theres that lol

Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!

A young business man dies, and in the process of crossing over, his soul accidentally drifts where it doesn't belong. The new body he's acquired? A 3,000 year old vampire, charmingly named Vampir. At least he's handsome. And rich. What will he find in this new world as he seeks a...

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[LuceLucky]

I'd like an opinion for this idea (it's just a summary and synopsis, really short):

My idea thread: isekai, dungeon fantasy, martial arts, sports and more

What it says on the tin, this is a thread where I'll post the general premise of my original novels. Constructive feedback is hella appreciated! None of these are up for adoption, but if they inspire you go ahead and write! I'd appreciate a headsup though, and a link to your work so I can read...

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Thank you!

 

[Anonymous_Buttfart]

I would be glad if your feedback.
Just your average rookie, expect some grammar and spelling mistakes. Thank you.

The Devil’s Tears

The 88th Magic Knight Candidate Examination is going to take place in the city of Abros, the capital of Rublor Kingdom. Thousands of young talented fighters handpicked by reputable Knight's are going to participate in this exam. But only a handful of those people will be able to pass the...

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[atgongumerki]

Conversion

Story of The Detester, an organisation specialised in extracting valuable resources from all over the continent, and how their lives changed after a mission gone wrong. The reincarnation part of the story starts in chapter 7. The world-view of the reincarnated being changes with newfound...

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would ask for a destructive and honest review
you can do it public

 

[Lord_Drakonus]

Here's mine:

Re-Phantasia: Thriving in a Fantasy World(Discontinued)

Our protagonist is a naive 16-year-old guy. Or at least, he was. He got stranded on an unknown island. Without having anything but his clothes, he tries to survive in this mysterious place. Encountering elves, demi-humans, demons, monsters, kingdoms, war, catastrophies, and many more...

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I quite easily get depressed and demotivated, however, I need some feedback on how to improve the story. So I need a semi-realistic semi-motivational review/feedback. Thank you.

 

[TachimeSan]

I would be glad to have a very truthful and honest review/feedback for my first novel. I'll take you up on that offer!

Transmigrated Into Another World: Aim to be the Noblewoman’s Butler

A fast-paced fantasy Isekai story that deals with politics, romance, wars, and conspiracies. Follow the story of Larc, a personal butler (pet?) of a young noble girl, as he deals with various problems and tries to stay away from further trouble, all the while trying to stay alive in this...

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[Yisa4ever]

Hello! I'm a new author here...are you still open for an honest review/feedback? If so, I would love one on my page.

Please and thank you!

The Shaman Queen

[ON HOLD] First, she strayed and was murdered. Now, reincarnated, Ivey struggles to be found. She searches for a home in a Realm she’s supposed to lead while battling conflicting desires and a sister who covets her position. *** +++Summary+++ She has no memories of the past. Ivey Link was...

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[Draculus-del-Viafat]

This ⬇ needs an honest public review or just a feedback, please) And if magic happens and you would like to read the next chapters, I will gladly give you a link ton them. And maybe we could talk about the novel, what you think of it and so on. Thanks)

 

[LazyPanda]

Please when you have time. I'd like an honest review.

Reborn as a Symbiote (Hiatus until further notice)

Hiatus: I apologize for the late update on progress. I have took a larger bite than I ought to from this novel, trying to incorporate many types of systems into one novel is a lot harder than I thought. I will begin anew from small stories that will be later...

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[Redchaos1]

Phantom Ddraig

The fall of the multiverse has reshaped reality under the hands of the primordial guardian Sophia, creating the new world of Jord. Join Christian Ddraig, the prince of the re-emerging nation of Avalon that now finds itself in the middle of a war between its new neighbors that threatens to...

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A honest review
May you please DM me.

 

[Redbow112]

Ragnarok in Another World

Patrolling through the forest where her village resides, Hilda finds a boy unconscious on the ground with a weird tattoo on his right forearm. Deciding that it was fine, Hilda brings to the boy back to her village. Unbeknownst to her that the boy is a monster who destroyed his...

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An honest review please. And public.

 

[Sushirollw]

I just released the prologue. if you don't mind, please review my light novel

The Tyrant Duchess

THIS STORY WILL BE ADAPTED INTO A WEBTOON. But in the Webtoon, there will be a change of about 40% of the story in this 'published web-novel'. The story and Cover are created and owned by SushirollW. If you found another similar story/cover on another platform; outside Scribblehub, that is...

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[Romance_Wuxia_Modern_genre]

Story Name: Assassins and Generals



Synopsis: The number one assassin of an assassin group and the empire's best general both fell down a cliff while they were fighting with each other. After falling down this cliff, their life would never be the same again.

The assassin woke up inside a kind hearted girl's hut, while the general was rescued by an assassin group and was brought to their base in a cave below the cliff.

As time goes by, would the assassin slowly become a kind hearted person like the girl while the general slowly adapt to the life of an assassin and become a traitor to the empire that he serves.

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/150100/assassins-and-generals/

I want a motivational and public review, thanks.

 

[cc.mscreeps18]

I might need an honest review though esp that I really wanted to improve my writing a lot. So yep.

Title: Warfare Between Lost Hearts

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/152366/warfare-between-lost-hearts/

Genre:
/Focus/
Action; War; Drama; Romance; Science Fiction

/Side/
Family; Friendship; Psychological

Grade: Rated T

Story Description:
During the long awaited war crisis in Manila, every legal-aged inhabitant, specifically voters, are required to work for the government in order to reestablish the living land and battle against a mass terrorist attack. The country where the terrorist originated are still in the unknown and under further research. Juveniles haven’t got any choice yet to live by themselves. Building a town, planting food crops, hunting animals and even manslaughter is required in the generation by means of survival. Keisha and his brother, Jaden, are left alone haunted by vicious brutes hiding from the shadows. Until then they found hope wherein they can rule over and persist the ongoing catastrophe.