Need help

[Caivy]

Honestly not sure if this is good enough. New to this table things.

 

[Cipiteca396]

The eye-searing Cyan and broken pixel font really sell the 'nineties computer' vibes.

But it's a little weird that the fourth attribute column(luck) is smaller than the others. Personally speaking, I'd also change Stamina out for Endurance. Stamina is usually a stat like mana or health, so including it with Strength and Dex is an odd(though possibly justified depending on your story) choice.

I don't know what Point or Specialty does though, so I can't comment on them.

 

[Caivy]

The eye-searing Cyan and broken pixel font really sell the 'nineties computer' vibes.

But it's a little weird that the fourth attribute column(luck) is smaller than the others. Personally speaking, I'd also change Stamina out for Endurance. Stamina is usually a stat like mana or health, so including it with Strength and Dex is an odd(though possibly justified depending on your story) choice.

I don't know what Point or Specialty does though, so I can't comment on them.

Wait what happen to the fonts?
I guess it's true that the luck column is smaller than the other stats.
Thanks so much for the feedback

 

[Cipiteca396]

Wait what happen to the fonts?

It's probably just a low resolution picture. It might be fine in an actual story.

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It just occurred to me, but if Mana is meant to be a main attribute it should be in a column with the rest. Where it's at now implies that it's an inherently different thing. (Which I assumed was intentional.)

 

[Caivy]

It just occurred to me, but if Mana is meant to be a main attribute it should be in a column with the rest. Where it's at now implies that it's an inherently different thing. (Which I assumed was intentional.)

Yep. The mana attribute is different from the rest of the stats.

It's probably just a low resolution picture. It might be fine in an actual story.

I mean I did just screenshot it so probably.
Btw what color do you think is best for the border

 

[Cipiteca396]

Btw what color do you think is best for the border

Hard to say. Anybody in light mode will have a white background, and anybody in dark mode will have the dark blue one, so both of those colors are out. Since your table is black, black is out as well.

You could try this one
This one
This one
This one
Or this one

But they're all a little weird. Experiment a little. All that matters is that it's a soft color and that it contrasts gently with the backgrounds to prevent eye strain.

 

[pelpelen]

Spoiler: Status

JESUS CHRIST

Age:█ █ Status: Died for your sins

Species: Son of God

Level: 0

Stregth:█ Agility:█ Dexterity:█ Sense:█

Endurance:█ Stamina:█ MP:█

Race skills:
______________

Passive:



Active:

______________

Unique Skills:
______________

______________

Skills:
______________

______________

I have no idea about the looks of it but i try to add a unique stat in every story like 'sense' or 'luck'
I don't know if specialties is just talents or 'skills' with a different name but i usually divide them as passive and active.

 

[Caivy]

Hard to say. Anybody in light mode will have a white background, and anybody in dark mode will have the dark blue one, so both of those colors are out. Since your table is black, black is out as well.

You could try this one
This one
This one
This one
Or this one

But they're all a little weird. Experiment a little. All that matters is that it's a soft color and that it contrasts gently with the backgrounds to prevent eye strain.

Thanks I guess will have to try to contrast different color in PS then.

Spoiler: Status

JESUS CHRIST

Age:█ █ Status: Died for your sins

Species: Son of God

Level: 0

Stregth:█ Agility:█ Dexterity:█ Sense:█

Endurance:█ Stamina:█ MP:█

Race skills:
______________

Passive:



Active:

______________

Unique Skills:
______________

______________

Skills:
______________

______________

I have no idea about the looks of it but i try to add a unique stat in every story like 'sense' or 'luck'
I don't know if specialties is just talents or 'skills' with a different name but i usually divide them as passive and active.

I do put luck in my stats but for sense I don't know if I should put it with my type of stories so yeah. Really depend on the type of stories your going for.