Need opinion on (almost finished) new cover (again)

[APieceOfRock]

Sadly, no Nazi Fox-girls this time :(

 

[SailusGebel]

It's okay.

 

[Snusmumriken]

Reincarnation of the Swordsmaster Greatest?

 

[APieceOfRock]

Reincarnation of the Swordsmaster Greatest?

Great title I know

 

[ForestDweller]

That looks good!

 

[NotaNuffian]

It looks like a touhou character.

 

[ManwX]

Its interesting. The title is a bit meh though. Still good art

 

[Iamnotabot]

What no more nazi flag, i'm dissapointed

 

[HelloHound]

placement of the text is confusing, greatest should be before swordsmaster and I'm not sure what you mean by the nazi flag (don't provide context I'm chillin) but I'm glad it's not there anymore

 

[proxybaba]

its gud

 

[melchi]

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Sadly, no Nazi Fox-girls this time :(

Is it bad I like the other one better? There is too much going on in this image. I think it would be better with a thick lined bust. While cool, the fancy fonts make it harder to read. (as a fox-girl) part is almost unreadable for me.

 

[tiaf]

why red on red though?

Good rules to remember:
1. use contrasting color for text
or
2. Pick a color that already exist in the picture

you could use yellow/gold as this glow bulb or shiny indigo as those light strokes
could also increase density of that text plate something to hide the AI botched dress

 

[APieceOfRock]

EDIT: It's finished. Thanks for the feedbacks.

 

[TotallyHuman]

Sadly, no Nazi Fox-girls this time :(

Fox girl in an office outfit and a sword.