This is my very first novel I'm writing called Xenos The Abysmal
Please have a read and tell me your suggestions on the changes I should make.
I actually haven't edited it yet, but I am planning on editing my chapters, so any inputs will be appreciated.
Criticism towards the plot and the story itself will also be helpful.
I'm also wondering about how to write a synopsis as I haven't been able to write a proper one as of yet.
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Please have a read and tell me your suggestions on the changes I should make.
I actually haven't edited it yet, but I am planning on editing my chapters, so any inputs will be appreciated.
Criticism towards the plot and the story itself will also be helpful.
I'm also wondering about how to write a synopsis as I haven't been able to write a proper one as of yet.
Xenos The Abysmal
After what seemed like vengeance, he was given a chance in a new world, Titan. Reborn as a half vampire and half human, 'Dhampir'. Will he be scrutinized for his mixed blood, or rule the world in darkness.