LostinMovement
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So, today I've uploaded the very first chapter to a story I've had stuck in my head for a while now. It's called Hearts of Rust.
It's a high/dark fantasy that features a time slip (going back in time) and a non-heterosexual male protagonist ( so yeah.. boys-love). It's narrated through first person ( I apologize to those who feel uncomfortable with this viewpoint). There are some aspects of world-building involved in the story and the first chapter doesn't contain anything explicit or sexual so I think it's safe to review.
The thing is English is not my native tongue so I hope that doesn't turn you away. I'm sure there are mistakes in it, god knows grammar and I, we kind of always had a love-hate relationship. I'm planning to update bi-weekly. So I hope to get some feedback while I polish the second chapter.
It's a high/dark fantasy that features a time slip (going back in time) and a non-heterosexual male protagonist ( so yeah.. boys-love). It's narrated through first person ( I apologize to those who feel uncomfortable with this viewpoint). There are some aspects of world-building involved in the story and the first chapter doesn't contain anything explicit or sexual so I think it's safe to review.
The thing is English is not my native tongue so I hope that doesn't turn you away. I'm sure there are mistakes in it, god knows grammar and I, we kind of always had a love-hate relationship. I'm planning to update bi-weekly. So I hope to get some feedback while I polish the second chapter.