ehtesham
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Love is Black, Baby!
IT'S A BASED ON A GIRL TRYING TO FIND WAYS TO GET HER DEAD BOYFRIEND BACK..!
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this is what the synopsis makes me think.The synopsis said:IT'S A BASED ON A GIRL TRYING TO FIND WAYS TO GET HER DEAD BOYFRIEND BACK..!
Assurbanipal is being rude but your synopsis sucks and tells me nothing about the story which is an immediate turn off.
I'd say fix your synopsis so it tells me what the story is about, then I'll consider reading it.
this is what the synopsis makes me think.
the main character is most likely female.
the main character is crazy or does necromancy.
the all capitals confuses me.
is the story based on a real life event? because it says based on a girl instead of about a girl.
Edit: I looked at the first chapter and that is not how you use commas.
No your the smart one here I regret reading three chapters.Well, it was more that judging by the synopis and tags, I suspected that this would some kind of BDSM bondage session with leather and whip.
Love is black, baby! Seriously, what should I expect otherwise?
No your the smart one here I regret reading three chapters.
I will remember your wisdom.