MisterSyafiq
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Good idea...
She yelled in excruciating agony as her face literally melted into the bowl of noodles.“Lixin, why are you spending money on that girl? She’s not from a good family.”
“Ah.” Lixin ignored Fang Min and ordered more dumplings for he and Shu Zhan.
Shu Zhan smiled and kept her eyes down. But she felt the heat from Fang Min's stare
He bought some cookies, it was poisoned, they both died, Fang Min stands there in confusion and horror,I was joking in discord about Chinese MTL's. And I wrote out this set of sentences showing a typical scene. Then I really liked what I wrote :
“Lixin, why are you spending money on that girl? She’s not from a good family.”
“Ah.” Lixin ignored Fang Min and ordered more dumplings for he and Shu Zhan.
Shu Zhan smiled and kept her eyes down. But she felt the heat from Fang Min's stare.
OWO! Someone please write this ^ story for me I'll read it!! And I know many others will too.
Fang – fragrance, virtueAight.
Sounds like a bl story...
Out of curiosity what does name Fang Min mean?
Nice :)Fang – fragrance, virtue
Min – quick or clever :)
I once had a story within a story (RPG, there were readable books), where I described a girl who slowly and seductively touched her partner...Not that I want to destroy your fun but this... It could be inserted into any kind of story, sci-fi, fantasy, horror... This can't even qualify as a scene. Heck! for all I know there could be no romance at all and he's only feeding her to eat her like in Hansel and Gretel!
I got the idea from a scene in Inuyasha (Miroku hits on a girl who turns out to be a mantis demon AND I think it was male). But I tried to write this like a smutty harlequin. I also had a number of children's stories on the shelves. This game was Oracle of Tao, which later inspired my novel.Heh, interesting.
"We were together all our previous lives. We are meant to be together." The heat from Fang Min's stare melted Shu Zhan's heart. Her face burnt up as the yin energy inside her rose beyond control.I was joking in discord about Chinese MTL's. And I wrote out this set of sentences showing a typical scene. Then I really liked what I wrote :
“Lixin, why are you spending money on that girl? She’s not from a good family.”
“Ah.” Lixin ignored Fang Min and ordered more dumplings for he and Shu Zhan.
Shu Zhan smiled and kept her eyes down. But she felt the heat from Fang Min's stare.
OWO! Someone please write this ^ story for me I'll read it!! And I know many others will too.