Plz Give me some feedback on my story.
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So far it's easy enough to follow. It's written straight to the point, which I like. Although due to the lack of descriptions, it kinda felt like a manga without the text. Not that it's a bad thing since I mostly just fill in the blanks in my head while reading.
It's a cute and funny story. Although I'm a bit confused about the leveling system.
Is it the kind of Cultivation + Isekai thing where your power went up stages as you gain levels? so you make a stage and specify their level ranges.
It's kinda weird seeing Normal, Rare and Uncommon as power levels since it's usually used with items.
When I make the power levels I did it like Mortal - Warrior - Saint - Immortal - God - ??? (as in unknown yet)
Though that's just a minor thing, I think the story's one to look forward to.
It's a cute and funny story. Although I'm a bit confused about the leveling system.
Is it the kind of Cultivation + Isekai thing where your power went up stages as you gain levels? so you make a stage and specify their level ranges.
It's kinda weird seeing Normal, Rare and Uncommon as power levels since it's usually used with items.
When I make the power levels I did it like Mortal - Warrior - Saint - Immortal - God - ??? (as in unknown yet)
Though that's just a minor thing, I think the story's one to look forward to.