Post your male character and I'll tell you what I think of him from my female reader's perspective

TotallyHuman

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Honestly, my male character isn't supposed to be likeable... But feedback on how you feel of him would be appreciated
Name of character: Victor Norman
Visuals (if any): no images, but a 5 sentence description can be given
1) tall
2) very, very thin, bordering on anarexia
3) rough, curly dark brown hair
4) eyes of murky swamp green color
5) has most bizarre sense of fashion
Description:
1) allegedly (his words, not mine) has never felt or received love of any kind
2) is obsessed with sleep, mildly depressed all the time
3) is obsessed with magic, treasures it above even his own health
4) very intelligent when it comes to things like maths, logic, rhetorics, and very very patient
5) doesn't experience or value empathy


Ps: I just realized how much of an edge Lord my character is...
 

K5Rakitan

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Honestly, my male character isn't supposed to be likeable... But feedback on how you feel of him would be appreciated

1) tall
2) very, very thin, bordering on anarexia
3) rough, curly dark brown hair
4) eyes of murky swamp green color
5) has most bizarre sense of fashion

1) allegedly (his words, not mine) has never felt or received love of any kind
2) is obsessed with sleep, mildly depressed all the time
3) is obsessed with magic, treasures it above even his own health
4) very intelligent when it comes to things like maths, logic, rhetorics, and very very patient
5) doesn't experience or value empathy


Ps: I just realized how much of an edge Lord my character is...
A younger me would try to save him, but the me now would avoid this black hole of a man.
 
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