Power-Shifting (i'll summarize the title because it's too long) Feedback

BoundLess

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Please give me a feedback about my very first novel, My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World.

After Volume 1 (which had 20-25 chapters), I plan to translate it to japanese and upload it on syosetu, hoping that it would be adapted as a Light Novel. I want feedbacks so that I can improve my writing skills and plot-making. Hope you'll give me some ☺️
 
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