Yeah, your synopsis needs to go. From a readers point of view, it doesn't make me want to read your entry. Rather than explaining what the story is supposed to be about, it would draw a reader in if you were giving a brief view into your story. Your synopsis is really, really vague and obtuse and just pushes readers away. You don't need to explain to your readers that you're going to use archaic or made up words, just use them and give enough context clues that the reader can figure it out. With you trying to explain your story and your word choices in the synopsis you come off as if you're assuming that the reader is too dumb to work things out for themselves. Most of us are pretty stupid but we don't like being reminded that we are.
As for your entry, I was honestly only able to read the first chapter. Like stated before, you know how to use nice words but you aren't linking them together in a cohesive manner. It's cool to have a good grasp of a lot of words but for story purposes you don't need to use them as often. You started off really vague and stayed vague and this lost my interest. If you were going for an air of mystery, you achieved it. So much so that I'm still pretty mystified as to what was going on.
If I can suggest anything, I would suggest that you try to nail down the main points of what you're trying to do with your story. Not just on a macro scale but a micro, chapter to chapter scale. Simplify your word choices and sentence structure. If you use them properly you'll still be able to flex your grammar muscles without having long, meandering sentences.
Edit: and to address why no one is voting in your end of chapter polls, I would say it's because it's pretty confusing. I read through the first chapter and I still don't have an answer for your poll question. You were a little too vague and meandering for my slightly stupid self.