Let's take other stories that have a cover too.
Jade Veterinarian, for example, great story, solid grammar and consistently good scene composition. Eleven chapters, 1.3k views. I got double his views with four times fewer chapters.
Shadow of Greed, amazing story, mad respect for the author; ten chapters, 380 views. It's not coverless stories that we're talking about here, they have their covers.
You're forgetting something. Are those stories that the general audience of SH
wants to read? No matter how wonderful a story might be from a technical standpoint, it doesn't matter in the slightest if it's not something that people
want to read. One of the highest-rated authors on RR with the top completed fiction (that is actually completed) has barely any followers. Why? Because it's just not what the general audience cares about. Looking at the two stories you posted, one features boys love (huge turnoff to readers despite the same readers usually loving girls love) and a dense protagonist tag (how often do you see people complain and hate on protagonists that are dense?). While neither of these things are bad, they are both tags that are going to turn off a general audience no matter how many boobs are on the cover. Furthermore, the people who have actually rated it have all given it five stars. The other story doesn't feature any of the popular tags that SH likes aside from maybe reincarnation. No romance, no lewds, no waifus, and so on. It could be an absolutely amazing story, but is it really what SH's general audience is interested in? I think it's pretty clear by now that most of SH has a pretty weeb-leaning audience. They like stories that are just like anime, manga, and light novels. The more you lean away from those, the harder it's going to be to get popular. So, of course a cover with an anime girl is going to get more views. But that's it. You've still got to prove you have a good story. The cover only catches their initial attention.
Now, if you posted a story with a cover like yours to Royal Road or Wattpad, for example, it might get some views and followers but would likely get trashed by people who hate it for having an anime girl on the cover. Meanwhile, both the stories you linked to would likely do better on a website like Royal Road. Especially the latter. Different audiences like different things. But in general, my point is that no matter how amazing your story and cover might be, none of that really matters if it's just not what the platform's general audience wants to read. This is an unavoidable issue unless you can somehow obtain a perfect balance of users who like every genre and tag equally. What the users want to read is what will rise to the top. What they don't want to read won't. Sites like these have voracious readers who will practically read
every single new story ever if they have even one thing in them that they like
. If you can't grab those readers at least, you're not going to grab the rest. And all those readers care about are tags/genres.
He Who Fights With Monsters is on Scribble Hub and only has 550 readers. My top story on Scribble Hub has 2400 followers. On Royal Road, He Who Fights With Monsters, using the same cover, has nearly 8000 readers. The same top story of mine on RR has 5300 followers. My stories are much more weeb-friendly, so they easily gain followers here whereas they have to fight for those followers on RR. His story easily gains followers on Royal Road but they have to be fought for here since it's not exactly a weeb story from my understanding of it.
So, what's wrong here? Well, to answer that, we gotta go back to the title of this thread. Readers are degenerate. In fact, they're so degenerate that the difference between a cover with boobs and one with not reaches 20X views. Of course, I'm in by no mean delusional enough to think that this difference would stay the same as both stories mature, but still, the point remains the same. If there is anything that can double, or triple your views in a matter of weeks, it's probably a cover change (it might not be as extreme once u reach the hundreds of thousands of views, but for those in the 10ks, definitely would).
"Sex sells" is a saying for a reason.
While yes, a cover is important and changing to a quality cover will boost views, it's not just "slap anime tiddies on your cover for 20x the views." Even if you do get those views, does it even matter if they don't follow you? More views = more potential followers, sure, but if you have to depend on anime tiddies to get followers, they're not going to last and they're almost certainly not going to be the type that you can convert into long-term fans and paid readers. A high-quality cover does wonders whether it has boobs on it or not.
But really, what's "wrong" here is that the stories you linked are niches in the SH community.
That's why you'll never get anywhere.
You heard it here, folks. Knowing how to market means you'll never get anywhere... despite marketing being one of the most important things you could ever do, and the fact that most traditional publishers now
require that you know how to market your own books and won't even look at you if you can't.
I suppose it is a good strategy for exposure, but it feels like it takes away some dignity. Like whoring yourself out for views especially when the cover has no relevance to the story.
If a cover has literally zero relevance to a story, then I can agree to some degree. But if a cover decides to feature one of the story's women characters rather than a male, even if the male is a lead, then there's nothing wrong with it unless you don't like money. And if liking money takes away dignity (because I've seen others claim that this is the case when they say things like you have - not that you're saying it), then it could be argued that wanting any form of exposure/recognition takes away dignity/artistic integrity.
Also, some people just like boobs. There's zero shame in that and no dignity is being lost there. Personally, I would rather not slut-shame book covers.
Not exactly paragraphs, are they? It's just what I've noticed the Japanese style was like. Most light novels from Japan are like that. Go and pick any and you'd see. I just copied it. The western style is great too but i kinda didn't like the walls of text. I felt the Japanese style gave an opportunity to emphasize certain lines so i used that. IBut, eh, i use different writing styles for different novels.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't this less of a style thing and more of a formatting thing? Since they're written vertically or something like that. The simplest way to translate it into English is just to keep them in short "paragraphs." Not that there's anything wrong with that since I love it myself = P