Review Request: Mirror Mirror (Erotic Fiction)

Aurorene

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Hello,
I am looking for a review on my novel. It is my first time writing in first person, and I was worried about grammatical issues.

The novel has around 18k words and I recently completed the first part. However, due to the lack of response and comments on the novel, I am not sure if the novel is good or bad.

Your few words on the issues that might be plaguing the novel would help me grow into a better author.

Mirror Mirror
 

K5Rakitan

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Wish I could right now, but I've got a lot of work these next couple of weeks. I'm just dropping in to say hi right now. It looks interesting though, so maybe remind me later.
 

Aurorene

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Wish I could right now, but I've got a lot of work these next couple of weeks. I'm just dropping in to say hi right now. It looks interesting though, so maybe remind me later.
Please stay safe and healthy. Take your time with the novel, there is no hurry.
 
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