Rellawing
Optimistic Kitten
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- Jan 2, 2019
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I realized it wasn't doing well here, and I had to wonder why. I read over it and decided the tense I'd experimented with when I wrote it just wasn't working as well as I'd hoped. I'm changing the tense from present to past, and I'm working on making it more engaging all-throughout, if I can.
I'm planning to eventually upload it to Scribble Hub again. I removed it because It'd only garnered a single favorite. I was sad to toss that single fave out because even one is important, yet I felt I could offer up a better version.
Well, anyhow, the sad part is I'm not going to have editing services on it any time soon. Chances are, it will be more raw than any of my works are currently. I hope some would be interested in reading it when it's offered up. I'm breaking it up into smaller parts... well what I consider small in any case. XD
Most around here submit shorter chapters over a longer term, I've noticed. What I consider short chapters is around four pages or so in Google Docs at 11px Verdana for most of it. The original work was a novelette. I'm not sure how long it will be in the end, probably it wouldn't reach novel-length. The story is solid and cute, but the way I told it might have not been optimal. '^^ It was written for Halloween originally as an event short story.
I'm planning to eventually upload it to Scribble Hub again. I removed it because It'd only garnered a single favorite. I was sad to toss that single fave out because even one is important, yet I felt I could offer up a better version.
Well, anyhow, the sad part is I'm not going to have editing services on it any time soon. Chances are, it will be more raw than any of my works are currently. I hope some would be interested in reading it when it's offered up. I'm breaking it up into smaller parts... well what I consider small in any case. XD
Most around here submit shorter chapters over a longer term, I've noticed. What I consider short chapters is around four pages or so in Google Docs at 11px Verdana for most of it. The original work was a novelette. I'm not sure how long it will be in the end, probably it wouldn't reach novel-length. The story is solid and cute, but the way I told it might have not been optimal. '^^ It was written for Halloween originally as an event short story.