Rise of an Empire - LCD

Ram5

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The clouds floating around, with the two suns shining down on him.
V-ing required to be or a verb before it, for example: The clouds were floating around with the two suns glared shining down on him.

“What’s so funny huh? You know that this must be done! You offended people that you know both you and I can’t handle!”
I don't know about other but when you joined both that and this next to each other, it's like you are very lacking of vocabulary, I am sorry if you feel offended.

And I agree with the comment, who's Brian? Does he there also to kill the MC?
 
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