GeriatricTools
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this is may be off topic, but come here to poke fun about how bland, over dramatic, cliche points your stories might go from time to time, or just how weird your characters are, or just anything you find not so satisfying in general as an author. (Or just to advertise your story, you’d know... *cough* *cough*)
I’ll go first, since my story is the easiest to find gripes with. (You don’t have to put down your story like I do... )
With a harem protagonist who instead of being painfully oblivious, straight up actively avoids having a harem, comes a story where the love interests’ backstories can be summarized to three paragraphs. Ace, your resident rich d*ckhead with raging emotional trauma that fill the supposedly light hearted story with angst, three love interests that can be thrown into stereotypes as childhood friend, tsundere cold character and sporty tomboy with a sexy body made to appease the fan boys. Despite this, the author still hasn’t wrote enough fan service other than the beach scene.
Boasting... a series with lots of stalking!
A first season that is generally rushed until readers may be confused!
Murdering the fourth wall repeatedly! (In one chapter)
And an author who always don’t plan ahead before writing and makes the even worse mistake of being shamelessly proud of admitting it!
I’ll go first, since my story is the easiest to find gripes with. (You don’t have to put down your story like I do... )
With a harem protagonist who instead of being painfully oblivious, straight up actively avoids having a harem, comes a story where the love interests’ backstories can be summarized to three paragraphs. Ace, your resident rich d*ckhead with raging emotional trauma that fill the supposedly light hearted story with angst, three love interests that can be thrown into stereotypes as childhood friend, tsundere cold character and sporty tomboy with a sexy body made to appease the fan boys. Despite this, the author still hasn’t wrote enough fan service other than the beach scene.
Boasting... a series with lots of stalking!
A first season that is generally rushed until readers may be confused!
Murdering the fourth wall repeatedly! (In one chapter)
And an author who always don’t plan ahead before writing and makes the even worse mistake of being shamelessly proud of admitting it!
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