Send me your stories(free feedback/reviews)

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

Heyo, if you find the time, kindly check out the following.

Ps: Much obliged by the way

 

[SolAthereanNyx]

It'll mean so much to me if you share your opinion on my book, thanks all the same!
(I have been using chatgpt on improving my writing and learned tips and tricks from it, but the book is written by me.)
Spirit of Two_Alvecore

 

[Fairemont]

The Wandering Maiden’s Travel Guide

Life sure snuck up on me… I was comfortable. Bored, but comfortable. Days went by, never changing. Lesson after lesson, preparing for something that might never be. Music, literature, martial arts: all the thing a hero should be good at. After all, what is a hero who can’t protect...

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If you're still looking for stuff to fill the void, you can take a peek at mine. It's long than your listed limited, but you don't have to read much, or any at all!

It's not your typical web novel.

I just want people to read it, and preferably comment or talk to me about it because I crave user interaction.

 

[Paul_Tromba]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

I would love a review and/or feedback if you are willing but no need since I know it is a bit long. If it is too long, don't worry about it. Just someone reading my story will be enough. I hope you enjoy reading!

The Supernatural Case of an Accidental Time Traveler Volume 1

Ever consider going back in time? Is it on purpose and to a specific time? Well, not this time in The Supernatural Case of an Accidental Time Traveler. This story is the first in a series of time-travel escapades with various supernatural and mythological undertones scattered throughout the...

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[FoundForester]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.

If you're not already bogged down with request, check this out I'm in the middle of a rewrite, so don't bother going past chapter 5 if you get there.

 

[Grimdarkidiot]

I did a thing. It's a project I am starting where I will compile a few short stories set in a shared world and through different POV´s. Different tones, settings, etc.

First one is out, so if you are feeling up for it, any feedback/reviews, just general opinion on it would be great!

Folk – A Short Stories Collection

If you come here hoping to find an epic fantasy novel with sprawling chapters and convoluted plots, I am sorry to disappoint you, for that is not what FOLK is. With this project comes an invitation for you to dive into the world of Stolia, a grim fantasy land where...

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[AdOtherwise]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

Novel I finished but I always like getting feedback:

Lowly Ascent

Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into the fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...

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[Danielbanda]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

Sure thing here is mine,

RYOJIN KUROHANE; THE ABYSSAL MONARCH

Ryojin Kurohane was once a powerful warrior, drawing strength from the mysterious Nexus Abyss—the place where the realms of mortals, demons, spirits, and gods collide. But betrayal came from the one he trusted most. Branded a threat, the Celestial Order cast him into the Abyss—a void so...

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[WiseElder]

Mine Mine Mine Mine
Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1557498/dao-of-the-mortals--xianxia-progression-litrpg-/

 

[Chris_Miau]

Are you still doing it? I have 10 chapters on another platform, but I only recently found scribblehub and I did not want to spam. So I am releasing them once a day. There are currently 2 up here!

I Inherited My System From My Father

One day a dazzling message pops out in front of Johannes. It says 'To my son...'. The young man cannot comprehend what happens and assumes he is still dreaming. But he will soon learn that this is neither a dream, nor anything he has ever seen. In the world...

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[L_Kay]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

I would truly appreciate it if you could spare some time to read my story,
It's titled Mending Broken Fates

Mending Broken Fates

'HOLD THE LINE!' Arasha commands as she rushes to fight monsters that no regular knight can handle. Arasha, the commander of the Scion Order, fought relentlessly and tirelessly to defend the nation from abominations. And Yet, Raptures in the space, rifts, begin to simultaneously appear all...

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Once again, thank you for your time

 

[Daisyberry]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

Feedback would be welcome! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1582362/cultivators-guide-to-the-universe-xianxia-parody/

 

[Edeshei]

Here's mineee I do hope you'll be interested

Caelestialis

SLOW BURN| DARK FANTASY | ROMANTIC ANGST | PROGRESSION In the once-prosperous city of Araes, the disappearance of the deity Razla has plunged the land into chaos. The people suffer, abandoned by their god, while crime and desperation fester in the streets. Dawn is a skilled reluctant thief but...

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[Spoopytagedie]

Reincarnated As A Wood Golem(Reboot)

Shortly after my son died I started dreaming of another world. I took over a wooden doll and met him, a boy who looked just like my earth son. I could never hear his name despite the nights we spent together. Though, those nights started to grow farther and farther...

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I guess both. Its a reboot of something I wrote a few years back so Id appreciate it if ya looked at the original too but I also appriciate any advice period since I want to improve. Thanks for any advice or reviews in advance!

Waiting on artist for the cover but ill have one eventually

 

[RiverDain]

Hi!

I’m new to this page and just posted my first story, His Name Was the Chorus. It’s a boys’ love (M/M) story full of slow-burn tension, longing, and emotionally messy characters.

His Name Was the Chorus

Nico Sanchez is a rising musician, determined to make his mark in the unforgiving world of fame. With a fierce belief in his talent, he's set on chasing his dreams. But when he meets Jordan Blake—a celebrated author who hides behind a carefully crafted public persona—their connection pulls...

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If you have a moment to check it out and share your thoughts, I’d really appreciate it! Feedback means a lot as I get started.

 

[marsred]

Here is mine Bride Of The Blade
It's getting good initial response on Inkitt.
Please read and review.

 

[ecschellenberg]

I'm kinda bored, so I'm giving you the chance to get a free feedback/review for your work (grammar not included since I suck at it). Putting grammar aside, I'm a seasoned reader and have quite a bit of experience, meaning I should be able to give you some valuable pointers.



Requirements:

• 25k words max
• No GB/Yaoi/NTR or other cursed tags (GL is fine)
• No AI slop (light edits are fine, but I don't want that obvious AI undertone)

Just tell me if you want a review, or feedback. You can also pick both.

I'm super new to all of this and I know this thread is a bit old, but I would love a review of my story. There's about 10k words thus far. It's a noir romance / supernatural blend.