Immortal_17
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Idk if this belongs here but...
I went out of my way to explain why Luke was able to win against Arnold, why Arnold wanted Flora and Lauran to be close with Luke(Hero Party first members) and the situation surrounding Olivia(which is addressed in the epilogues of the second volume). Also, Arnold doesn't care about his death flags? How is he supposed to see them without alerting people? His only way of even knowing someone is out to kill him is when he equips his helmet.
The reason Luke won against Arnold was figured out by Arnold in his fight with Lancelot.
Yet there are always these people who read without analyzing the information that they've read(or they read like ten chapters and know more than the readers who read 80 chapters). Also, they expect things to happen in one chapter and be explained in the next as if storytelling works that way. I have six volumes worth of content planned out and everything that may confuse the readers will be covered along the road. So be patient before posting reviews and making yourself look like idiots. Take this advice for other stories as well.
I'm not naming names since you'll know who you are after reading this rant.
Reborn As The Villain
I went out of my way to explain why Luke was able to win against Arnold, why Arnold wanted Flora and Lauran to be close with Luke(Hero Party first members) and the situation surrounding Olivia(which is addressed in the epilogues of the second volume). Also, Arnold doesn't care about his death flags? How is he supposed to see them without alerting people? His only way of even knowing someone is out to kill him is when he equips his helmet.
The reason Luke won against Arnold was figured out by Arnold in his fight with Lancelot.
Yet there are always these people who read without analyzing the information that they've read(or they read like ten chapters and know more than the readers who read 80 chapters). Also, they expect things to happen in one chapter and be explained in the next as if storytelling works that way. I have six volumes worth of content planned out and everything that may confuse the readers will be covered along the road. So be patient before posting reviews and making yourself look like idiots. Take this advice for other stories as well.
I'm not naming names since you'll know who you are after reading this rant.
Reborn As The Villain