Story Feedback. As Thank you

[Joseon_Walking]

Hey folks,

Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who has checked out my own series (linked below). I have 3 years of unedited rough draft content saved up that I am going to release as it is done so feel free to check it out and expect consistent updates for the foreseeable future.

Because it has gotten such good feedback in the few days it has been being posted on regularly I decided I wanted to give some free constructive reviews (this isn't a give you 5 star for free). I give legitimate feedback on my initial impressions.

Hit me up with a link and I will attempt to get to your story as I can. I live in Korea and for many of you will be on odd timezone.


P.S. ---> If you'd like here is a link to my own story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/511212/the-dance-of-mortals-and-immortals/

Hope you all have a great day/night.

 

[MareoKen]

Hi, I appreciate you doing this! Would love some feedback on my novel!

Spirit Exorcists

When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that reveals itself to be Ruby. Shen, an exorcist from the Spiritual Anomalies Investigation Bureau, an...

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I've been pretty busy lately but I'll definitely check out your novel when I have the time! Thank you!

 

[Joseon_Walking]

Hi, I appreciate you doing this! Would love some feedback on my novel!

Spirit Exorcists

When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that reveals itself to be Ruby. Shen, an exorcist from the Spiritual Anomalies Investigation Bureau, an...

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I've been pretty busy lately but I'll definitely check out your novel when I have the time! Thank you!

Wanted to let you know I didn't forget about you. I got hit with a ton of stuff at work I am saving your work now and will give it a review asap.

 

[MareoKen]

Wanted to let you know I didn't forget about you. I got hit with a ton of stuff at work I am saving your work now and will give it a review asap.

Thank you! I've also added your work, I'm currently busy as well but I'll definitely check it out when I've got more time!

 

[Sairren]

Thank you for the opportunity. Any feedback would be appreciated, and hope things keep going well for you. o wo)b

Drunks & Fanatics

Freshly anointed cleric Tessa Vivuk aspires to be a Hero after having been saved by one as a child. But when she attempts to join the Heroes' Guild, the doors are shut on her. Unwilling to give up, she joins the Adventurers' Guild and believes she can earn enough recognition...

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[georgelee5786]

The Bid To Destroy Silver Phoenix

Gryo Autonomous Combat Units. The world's first autonomous war machines. Led by commander units with highly advanced AI, they are capable of waging war without any help from the human race. But this strength is humanity's downfall. The commander units are unhappy with humans using them and...

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Only 3 chapters long. You can take your time before reading this. Work is more important than writing a stranger's book.

 

[lost_cause]

Really Appreciate this. I would love to receive some pointers about what I wrote. I don't know how to tag the story. Anyway here is the link

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Cliche Story of a Mob Villain .

Again Thank You.

 

[ZeroX0666]

Hey folks,

Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who has checked out my own series (linked below). I have 3 years of unedited rough draft content saved up that I am going to release as it is done so feel free to check it out and expect consistent updates for the foreseeable future.

Because it has gotten such good feedback in the few days it has been being posted on regularly I decided I wanted to give some free constructive reviews (this isn't a give you 5 star for free). I give legitimate feedback on my initial impressions.

Hit me up with a link and I will attempt to get to your story as I can. I live in Korea and for many of you will be on odd timezone.


P.S. ---> If you'd like here is a link to my own story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/511212/the-dance-of-mortals-and-immortals/

Hope you all have a great day/night.

Would love some feedback on my work.

Witch Hunting Love

What happens when a witch and a witch hunter fall in love? The short answer, chaos ensues. Aurora Fay is NOT your average girl. She is a witch of the Coven, and when dark magic or supernatural creatures aren't going bump in the night, she's dealing with family problems. Her...

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