Story feedback : Eadem historia futura

[d3adman]

Hi everyone,

I just registered yesterday and started writing my first story. My strength lies in bringing new ideas to the table while I am weaker at writing characters.
I hope you would read the prologue and voice out any thoughts you have about the same. If there are any massive errors that I missed, I would really love
to rectify the same before writing any more chapters.

Thank you for taking your time to read this rambling post.

Link to the story : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/74494/eadem-historia-futura/

 

[NiQuinn]

I would suggest at least writing 5 chapters - 6 since you have a prologue out - before asking for feedback. You won't get proper feedback if you just have a very short nonsensical prologue out. Don't get me wrong, it's well-written enough but there's nothing there. There's no 'story' to feedback on.

 

[d3adman]

Thanks for your feedback. I am writing some more chapters, but like I said, I just wanted to see whether there were any big red flags that I missed until now. Thanks for your feedback either way. I was way too eager I guess.