BlackKnightX
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For me, the reasons vary, but here goes:
- Boring character: a character that’s too passive, too wimpy, too much of a loser—or a character at the other end of the spectrum; too cold, too edgy, too evil. (Just give me a decent human being with likable personality, confidence, and charm. I’ll dig it like crazy.)
- Too slow-paced. (Keep moving!)
- Too much unnecessary details. (Details are nice—that is if I give a fuck about them in the first place. Make me care first!)
- Restraint in realism. (I don’t care about realism in fiction. You can write realistically, but don’t let it restrain you. Just transport me into an alien planet full of weird things. I’ll dig that.)
- Too much angsts with no light of hope. (If you wanna be edgy, fine, but at least give me a hint of hope, and don’t make it too depressing. I just wanna have fun, for fuck’s sake!)
- Too cold: this one’s hard to explain. It’s in the language and prose, I think. (Don’t be a camera; be a storyteller. Welcome me with a warm hug and some nice words—a kiss or two is always welcome, if you’re a chick. then, tell me a story.)
That’s pretty much it for me. There are something else as well, but I wouldn’t tell you that now, would I~? *smirks*
Enough about me. What’s yours?
- Boring character: a character that’s too passive, too wimpy, too much of a loser—or a character at the other end of the spectrum; too cold, too edgy, too evil. (Just give me a decent human being with likable personality, confidence, and charm. I’ll dig it like crazy.)
- Too slow-paced. (Keep moving!)
- Too much unnecessary details. (Details are nice—that is if I give a fuck about them in the first place. Make me care first!)
- Restraint in realism. (I don’t care about realism in fiction. You can write realistically, but don’t let it restrain you. Just transport me into an alien planet full of weird things. I’ll dig that.)
- Too much angsts with no light of hope. (If you wanna be edgy, fine, but at least give me a hint of hope, and don’t make it too depressing. I just wanna have fun, for fuck’s sake!)
- Too cold: this one’s hard to explain. It’s in the language and prose, I think. (Don’t be a camera; be a storyteller. Welcome me with a warm hug and some nice words—a kiss or two is always welcome, if you’re a chick. then, tell me a story.)
That’s pretty much it for me. There are something else as well, but I wouldn’t tell you that now, would I~? *smirks*
Enough about me. What’s yours?
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