Ten chapters but I don't know if I'm on the right track. Can someone tell me?

[ILuxTenebris]

I recently posted ten chapters of my novel Fearing Life, Coveting Death.

However, I still have no feedback, can someone tell me if what I am writing is good?

 

[CadmarLegend]

I recently posted ten chapters of my novel Fearing Life, Coveting Death.

However, I still have no feedback, can someone tell me if what I am writing is good?View attachment 7333

First of all... did you ask for feedback? That is one of the problems... most readers are silent... so you should ask them for feedback...

 

[Napelynn]

First of all... did you ask for feedback? That is one of the problems... most readers are silent... so you should ask them for feedback...

That’s not the problem, the problem is that it was posted an hour ago.

 

[CadmarLegend]

That’s not the problem, the problem is that it was posted an hour ago.

Haha.... but I'm just recommending @ILuxTenebris to maybe put that is the A/Ns... but the hour problem IS a big deal. Don't worry, Lux. You'll probably get a comment in a few hours or in a day.

 

[Napelynn]

I recently posted ten chapters of my novel Fearing Life, Coveting Death.

However, I still have no feedback, can someone tell me if what I am writing is good?View attachment 7333

I probably should be reviewing your work myself, but I’m tired right now so go to this thread.

Free First Chapter Feedback

I would gladly hear your opinion on my beginning. Return of Magic, Ascendance of the Old Blood. | Scribble Hub Thank you very much for your time.

forum.scribblehub.com

You won’t get an immediate response of course, but you are at least guaranteed a well thought out review.

 

[ILuxTenebris]

Haha.... but I'm just recommending @ILuxTenebris to maybe put that is the A/Ns... but the hour problem IS a big deal. Don't worry, Lux. You'll probably get a comment in a few hours or in a day.

Cough Cough. In truth, I posted it in Scribble hub today, but it has been in Webnovels for weeks already.

First of all... did you ask for feedback? That is one of the problems... most readers are silent... so you should ask them for feedback...

Not in scribble hub

I probably should be reviewing your work myself, but I’m tired right now so go to this thread.

Free First Chapter Feedback

I would gladly hear your opinion on my beginning. Return of Magic, Ascendance of the Old Blood. | Scribble Hub Thank you very much for your time.

forum.scribblehub.com

You won’t get an immediate response of course, but you are at least guaranteed a well thought out review.

Thankks