NamesAreTheBaneOfMyExistence
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Terror Infinity – Game Master
LitRPG across worlds. Marvel then to wherever next.
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The original novel was only about movies, thus I've expanded the choices to nearly all of fiction that I've read."
The story has been a doozy, I've had to rewrite this work countless times, I swear I'm half way to the triple digits in how much I've done so on earlier chapters to the point it feels almost as if I'll never quite get it to the next level. This is something that's plagued a lot of my works.
I feel my next best possible step is to just get some good proper feedback.
Whether it be through a Beta or just someone's thoughts.
These are the things I feel are the best to focus on
Story portrayal
Writing Format
Character presentation and interactions
Writing Style and description of the surroundings, as well as characters.
Proper ideas of how to deal with background and side plots happening where the MC doesn't have to be there to offer vibrancy to the world.
Grammar formations, simply ideas for it.
Feel free to write back about anything else I haven't listed.
This was all I can think of at the moment
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