The art of smut

[ScarletWeeb]

They usually have both, actually

not in the hentais I have watched

 

[RavenRunes]

Stay away from purple prose (no thundering spurting shafts or earth-quaking slippery love tunnels - which is just plain gross and not sexy at all), call things what they are, focus mainly on sensation and feeling. Pretty sure no-one here needs or wants a biology lesson. Preeeeeetty sure.....

Grass is totally sexy. Depending on the grass obvs. That dry scratchy stuff with the sheep shit in it isn't but nice new damp green Spring stuff on your neighbour's pristine lawn is.

 

[Anon2024]

Stay away from purple prose (no thundering spurting shafts or earth-quaking slippery love tunnels - which is just plain gross and not sexy at all), call things what they are, focus mainly on sensation and feeling. Pretty sure no-one here needs or wants a biology lesson. Preeeeeetty sure.....

Grass is totally sexy. Depending on the grass obvs. That dry scratchy stuff with the sheep shit in it isn't but nice new damp green Spring stuff on your neighbour's pristine lawn is.

I have to semi-agree with the purple prose. I think purple prose can be used well but not when overly done. Most who use purple prose end up overdoing it which ruins the scene.