"The Eight Paths of the Hero’s Redemption"

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Read this epic fantasy story: The Eight Paths of Hero's Redemption. Join Don and Miriel on a journey full of tensions, mysteries and unique characters, including an enigmatic flute player. With a raw style and vivid dialogue, this story immerses you in a world of adventure, moral conflict and vibrant landscapes - perfect for fantasy lovers!

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:blob_hmm_two: Why don't the titles match?
is the title of the chapter, not of the story.
AI and they forgot to change the copy-paste, probably.
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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH28

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Miriel unleashes her fury against a group of thieves led by an arrogant low-class assassin, showing her skill and coolness in a visceral fight.

“I’m tired every time I run an errand for the lady, not being able to travel in peace. And now I have to defend a brat who can’t even defend himself,” I thought.


I noticed that this Vargus guy talked a lot for someone of the assassin class, and when I saw how he looked at me, as if he desired me, I felt my blood boil, but being impulsive doesn’t suit me. So, while he was talking, I got into position, closed my eyes, and visualized the terrain, focusing on my breathing, repeating words that didn’t leave my lips: “Think, measure, evaluate.” I repeated it over and over. The background noises no longer bothered me, as if I were in a soundproof room. The mild breeze spread cold through my body, a cold that pierced my veins until I felt it energize my fists, allowing me to grip my daggers even tighter. After a few seconds, I felt the airwaves distort. I saw a small purple light growing larger, taking the shape of human veins, and I knew it was him activating his invisibility skill. And though it wouldn’t help him at all, I see everything, and nothing escapes me.


Then, in the split second he tried to activate his skill, I had already sliced off his left ear, though that wasn’t where I was aiming. I was impressed that he managed to dodge my attack, but in the second that followed, the look of panic on his face was delightful. Though, they all do the same before I kill them.


But they’re just simple thieves; I should just scare them and be done with it, because with this goody-two-shoes kid around, it’s better not to frighten him. I wouldn’t want trouble with the lady.


As he fell to the ground, the gust of air I brought with me threw him to his boss’s feet. He tried to get up but couldn’t, and he stared at me with the same eyes as all those I’ve left alive…


Fear.


I just stood there, looking at what was left of his ear, waiting for the pain to hit him, because, like the wind I dragged behind me, they always take a while to feel the pain—I avoided sensitive spots. But instantly...
 
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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH30

"Miriel, where did you find this kid this time? You never travel with decent people," asked the subcaptain, directing a critical look at Miriel.


"What can I say? It seems I'm cursed," replied Miriel with a resigned tone.


"Look, kid, whether you believe it or not, it's highly likely that the old man you're defending set up his own robbery. I hear the same story every time I'm sent to this island," explained the subcaptain to Don.


"And what did you find?" he asked, curious.


"He was carrying an illegal product that many criminals deal in, a product derived from a trafficking network of hydroïds, specifically mermaids," she clarified.


"I've never seen one. Mermaids? Why do they do this?" insisted Don, surprised.


"The question is: where did you find this boy?" said the subcaptain, looking at Miriel confused. Then she turned, sensing something strange coming from Don. "Hey, I can't sense any ether from you at all. How do you hide your true power so effectively? You must be very strong…"
 

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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH32

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"Don, a weak and insignificant man, dines with Miriel in a bar full of hunters and adventurers. He orders the cheapest dish and endures the taunts of his companion, aware of his uselessness and that his presence makes everyone in the place uncomfortable. His “eter” is non-existent, as if he were a walking corpse, which attracts looks of contempt and fear. The tension increases when an aristocratic, powerful and enigmatic woman appears: Lu'u Teruise Eveline Dusk, a high-ranking hunter and alchemist. She recognizes Miriel, is strangely kind to Don, and singles him out for something unknown, causing murmurs and hatred among those present. Although Don tries to please and apologize, he only succeeds in humiliating himself further, but Lu'u defends him and imposes his authority over the others before inviting him to his workshop."

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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH33

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Don seeks a mystical alloy for an enchanted ring, but discovers that it is not available in Teruise's workshop. She suggests he mine it by joining the bounty hunter's guild. In the end, an incident reveals that Don is hiding a physical transformation (glowing red eyes and a tail), leading him to flee, leaving Teruise and Miriel puzzled about his identity.

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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH34

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Miriel finds Don in a dark alley, emanating a sinister and unknown ether, his eyes as black as night, lost in a trance. Waking him with a slap, the aura disappears, but Miriel's doubts grow. Later, at an inn, she confronts him, suspecting that he is a Supaibi, a being of protective lineage. Don denies everything, but after a tense discussion, Miriel apologizes and he begins to explain... only to faint. His eyes darken again, the lights go out, and an eerie mystery envelops the room in darkness.

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THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: First path – CH35

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Don emerges from an eerie, light-swallowing trance with newfound purpose, seeking his past and someone named Inocensy. Miriel, wary of his strange aura, reluctantly agrees to help him for a price, hiding her intent to potentially eliminate him if he’s a threat. They set off to find Teruise at the bounty hunters’ guild to pursue a mystical alloy and answers about Don’s identity.

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