Deeprotsorcerer
Skeletal Eromancer
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Howdy. Do you have a little snippet of your WiP(work in progress) that you're unsure about? Do you want some of your fellow writers' (or your prospective readers') eyes on it so they can tell you to stop before it's too late, or stroke your ego enough for you to write the rest of your freaking chapter?
Well this thread is for you.
Post no more than three paragraphs at a time of your WiP here and I/anyone else who cares will judge you and hopefully, provide tips and laser-focused feedback.
I shall offer the first sacrifice:
Edit: this might be in the wrong subfourm... tasukete?!
Well this thread is for you.
Post no more than three paragraphs at a time of your WiP here and I/anyone else who cares will judge you and hopefully, provide tips and laser-focused feedback.
I shall offer the first sacrifice:
So eager was the mass of undead to get in that pus slicked fingers and clumps of skin sloughed through the space between the frame and the doors, creating a growing putrid pool of gods knew how many diseases. The first whole zombies to break through fell forward under the weight of their kin, stymying the rest as they were trampled, the Radiant Crux and their cohorts didn’t waste the opportunity.
Edit: this might be in the wrong subfourm... tasukete?!
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