BenJepheneT
Light Up Gold - Parquet Courts
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I always hate the teenagers-fighting-against-oppresive-regime character. The Katniss troupe. The whole Divergent series.
Somehow or rather, when someone writes that character, they just spout the most insane bullshit plans to topple the bad guy's scheme, and everytime it somehow WORKS. I hate this reward behaviour, only because the author cripples the bad guy just to make the good guy look good. And the good guy acts like "yes it was genius plan all along" and actually think they deserve to be smug and snappy about it.
If their schemes and antagonists were ACTUALLY smart, I'd root for this troupe to no end, as I enjoy seeing one smarty-pants fuck over a big conglomerate. But no, it's always this borderline retarded BIG MEN IN CHAIRS having glaring fucking holes in their systems and the teenagers act like the Einsteins of their generation when they point it out. They're smart, but only by default and lack of competition, since the whole fucking world revolves around putting them on a pedestal.
Jesus Christ, I know you hate the government and think they're all courier corrupt, self-serving fucks, and you want to write that, but holy fuck you couldn't have built a bigger strawman if you tried. Governments aren't incompetent; they're self-serving. They're MORE THAN CAPABLE of making good decisions for the world, they just want to have heavier pockets than giving actual good for the people.
This character, to be exact.
Somehow or rather, when someone writes that character, they just spout the most insane bullshit plans to topple the bad guy's scheme, and everytime it somehow WORKS. I hate this reward behaviour, only because the author cripples the bad guy just to make the good guy look good. And the good guy acts like "yes it was genius plan all along" and actually think they deserve to be smug and snappy about it.
If their schemes and antagonists were ACTUALLY smart, I'd root for this troupe to no end, as I enjoy seeing one smarty-pants fuck over a big conglomerate. But no, it's always this borderline retarded BIG MEN IN CHAIRS having glaring fucking holes in their systems and the teenagers act like the Einsteins of their generation when they point it out. They're smart, but only by default and lack of competition, since the whole fucking world revolves around putting them on a pedestal.
Jesus Christ, I know you hate the government and think they're all courier corrupt, self-serving fucks, and you want to write that, but holy fuck you couldn't have built a bigger strawman if you tried. Governments aren't incompetent; they're self-serving. They're MORE THAN CAPABLE of making good decisions for the world, they just want to have heavier pockets than giving actual good for the people.
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This character, to be exact.