LilTV1155
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It's a creation myth that centered around the cosmos.
The story begin with poetic introduction.
Then jump straight to lab report that talk about how the cosmos got created.
Near the end, the cosmic creators come to life due to the narration.
Those cosmic deities fight and die, then reborn into new life on Earth.
Problems?
I am trying to write a creation myth that has both magic and science elements in a lab report format (which doesn't look like it) and it get nowhere due to lack of transitions and too much detailed explanations which sounds more like science jargons than myths.
Imagine explaining how your cosmos got created from the smallest particles into a god, to a kid or any Reader lacking in imaginations. Hard!
But I want to finish this story rather than leave it half-baked.
The story begin with poetic introduction.
Then jump straight to lab report that talk about how the cosmos got created.
Near the end, the cosmic creators come to life due to the narration.
Those cosmic deities fight and die, then reborn into new life on Earth.
Problems?
I am trying to write a creation myth that has both magic and science elements in a lab report format (which doesn't look like it) and it get nowhere due to lack of transitions and too much detailed explanations which sounds more like science jargons than myths.
Imagine explaining how your cosmos got created from the smallest particles into a god, to a kid or any Reader lacking in imaginations. Hard!
But I want to finish this story rather than leave it half-baked.