OokamiKasumi
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Writing the LOVE scene
verses the Sex scene.
verses the Sex scene.
~ For step-by-step instructions see: Making ROMANCE ~
-----Original Message-----
“…How exactly I would go about writing a 'romantic/love' scene?”
-- Curious about Loving
I believe what you’re actually asking is the same question asked by everyone in the entire world:
“How can you tell when you are loved?”
First of all, don’t confuse Romance with Love. They are two completely different things!
DISCLAIMER: This is Advice, and only advice. If you choose to use this technique, or just bits and pieces from here or there; Great! If not, that's fine too. Feel free to fold, spindle, or mutilate as you see fit. It is only advice.
From Braham Stoker's Dracula
Love vs. Romance
There IS a difference
Romance– a manipulation technique designed to make someone receptive to Sex.
The source of Romance is LUST.
Love – when someone’s happiness means more than your own.
The source of Love is AFFECTION.
To many people, Romance means ‘showing love’. That’s not true. You show love by Protecting the ones you care for with the intent to ensure their lasting happiness. That doesn’t necessarily mean that you’re nice to them.
"How do you write a LOVE scene
-- as opposed to a SEX scene?"
-- as opposed to a SEX scene?"
Exactly the same way. The real difference is the MOTIVE.
- Lust’s motive is ORGASM.
- Love’s motive is AFFECTION.
"How do you SHOW the difference?"
It’s easier than you think, because you probably already do it regularly without realizing it.
Think in terms of your Pet...
When you want to show how much you care, you stroke them, cuddle them, and play with them. You also feed them, clean up their poop, and make sure they have vet check-ups. You do all of these things to keep them happy and healthy. You do these things to keep them from suffering in any way.
You do the SAME THING with people you love whether they are your parents, your friends, or your children – you hug them, play with them, joke around with them, make sure they’ve eaten, make sure their colds are taken care of, you make sure they are not suffering in any way –- physically or emotionally. You also bitch them out when they’ve done something that could harm them or result in misery.
The difference between these people and a Lover, is that when you are showing that you care for a lover, you use sex to bring them the greatest physical pleasure you can.
Sex is just another form of PETTING.
LUST is a whole other bowl of kimchee.
LUST is a physical urge, like eating when you’re hungry, seeking warmth when cold, or needing to pee. It is an urge that seeks relief just like all your other physical urges.
If the urgency is great enough, LUST will attempt every dirty trick in the book to get their hands on their object of choice to gain some relief. If that particular object gives them exceptional pleasure, whether it be a dildo, a rubber doll, a super soft sock, or a person, they’ll make sure that the toy is cared for, and in some cases, jealously guarded – so that the toy will still be there (and receptive) when they want to use it again.
The key word here is USE.
- Lust USES others for selfish physical gratification.
- Love doesn’t use, it GIVES.
-- If something should happen to cause hurt to the one loved, the one who cares is devastated by their FAILURE stop suffering from happening.
Lust takes affection to make themselves happy.
-- Toys have PHYSICAL value, not Emotional value. If their toy should break or refuse to be used, they will be FRUSTRATED and ANGRY, but they won’t think they failed. They’ll think the TOY Failed -- and just go out and get another toy.
"What's the real difference between
a Love scene and a Lust scene?"
Very simply:
Lust Takes pleasure.
Love Gives it.
Art by Amano Kojima
Jealousy is NOT a sign of LOVE.
a Love scene and a Lust scene?"
Very simply:
Lust Takes pleasure.
Love Gives it.
Art by Amano Kojima
Jealousy is NOT a sign of LOVE.
Jealousy a sign of possession, of ownership; of FEAR that their object will be taken from them and no longer theirs to USE; of Obsession and ADDICTION.
Jealousy is a point-blank sign of someone concerned with their own happiness, Not their Beloved's. "I won't let you make me unhappy!"
When the Beloved's happiness comes SECOND to the lover's happiness, "If you love me, you'd do this to make me happy..." What they are expressing is OWNERSHIP.
When one is IN LOVE, and their lover sleeps with someone else, they do Not feel jealousy, they feel FAILURE, and point the blame squarely on themselves. “I wasn’t enough to make my beloved happy in bed. What did I do wrong?” If their feelings are strong enough, they may ALLOW their lover to keep their other lover --and give up on them entirely-- simply because it's what makes their beloved happy.
When someone is merely in LUST, they will ISOLATE the object of their desires; from friends, co-workers, family, and even pets. They will use every trick they know, such as; Stalking and Spying, to keep rivals (read: THIEVES) from taking what they have claimed as theirs, even if it's merely their object of Lust's attention.
Should the object of their Lust sleep with someone else, they will attack the one attempting to steal their possession. "How dare you touch what is MINE?!"
Then they will attack their 'supposedly' Beloved. "How dare you let someone else have you?! You belong to ME!" Punishment --with the intent to cause Emotional damage-- swiftly follows, such as; breaking something important to their Lust object, a brutal and bloody beating, or flat-out rape.
If their Lust Object doesn't leave at that point, the jealous owner will then enforce stricter forms of ISOLATION on their Lust Object; up to and including Imprisonment, to 'protect' them from Escape and/or Theft.
Why do some married women allow their husbands to have a mistress?
Because they LOVE their husbands and want them to be happy. If having a toy makes them happy, they’ll even arrange to get a good quality toy for him.
Note: This happens far more often than you might realize. I have several very good friends who were personally invited to be a paid mistress by the wife of a corporate husband.
Why do married men ALWAYS return to their wives?
-- Because they LOVE their wives. Anyone else is just an object to relieve their physical urges -- rather like a dildo.
Think on that while you write your love scene. I swear the difference will show through.
-----Original Message-----
"I'm not sure I agree with the last bit about mistresses, but that's mostly because I find myself unable to justify anyone 'in love' ever cheating on their loved one - again, because it's hurtful and selfish, and a way of making yourself feel good, even as it hurts your spouse."
-- Not Fond of Cheaters
That bit about Mistresses was merely a point to show that someone who is in love will allow their loved one damned near anything, even if it hurts them -- not an endorsement.
Love can be a real bitch.
Once you love someone, no matter what they do to you, you can't stop loving them. You can only endure it as long as you can, until either they straighten up, or they drive you away.
I learned my lessons through cold hard experience.
Loveless
-----Original Message-----
"Wow, I always thought Romance was about Love...?"
-- Prefers Romance
EVERYONE thinks Romance is about love -- because we really, really WANT it to be.
Romance tells us that the Other Person gives up everything for Us, when in fact, the opposite is true. Real Love makes us give up everything for THEM.
When you think about it, Love is a very scary emotion. It makes us give up everything we want, everything we are -- for someone else. If they are not worthy of such a sacrifice, it doesn't matter because we LOVE them and want them to be happy at any cost.
Real Love comes in many different shapes and colors.
A love that looks destructive from the outside, such as Bondage and Domination, could in fact be perfectly supportive and exactly what both lovers need from each other. A good movie that illustrates this perfectly is "Secretary".
On the other hand, what an outsider may think is positive and supportive might in fact not be love at all. Case in point, stalking was once thought of as being an expression of love. Angry possessiveness can look an awful lot like love when in fact it is a terror tactic designed to isolate the one supposedly beloved.
When a lover asks their beloved to choose between them and anything else, a friend, a pet, or even a hobby, they not interested in their significant other's happiness. They are ensuring that their toy has no outside distractions and is available for their convenience. A good movie that illustrates this is "Sleeping with the Enemy".
A lover that yells at their beloved for their destructive habits, such as over-spending, drugs, booze, gambling...is more likely to be showing real love, than a lover that sweetly begs their beloved to drop their plans for going out with their friends for a romantic dinner date with them.
How do you tell the difference?
-- Measure each action by this question: "WHO benefits from the Results?"
I am firmly of the opinion, that if one is going to write about Love, one should really know what it is -- and what it isn't.
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