SailusGebel
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Coward.Not interested.
Coward.Not interested.
Maybe if I was legitimately writing something to sell, but only thing I'm posting with this name is low-effort smut. You can freely criticize it if you want but it's on Ritoria. Once I'm done with it I'm probably going to disappear from this Screen name.Coward.
Maybe if I was legitimately writing something to sell, but only thing I'm posting with this name is low-effort smut. You can freely criticize it if you want but it's on Ritoria. Once I'm done with it I'm probably going to disappear from this Screen name.
i mean, i can i just don't want to. at least futa ntr incest can result in something interesting. every gb gl novel is almost exactly the same. im boycotting the overly popular inflated genresNot interested. I was just testing your limits. Think it's funny you can read FUTA NTR And INCEST but no GL or GB.
I'm annoyed but I agree.i mean, i can i just don't want to. at least futa ntr incest can result in something interesting. every gb gl novel is almost exactly the same. im boycotting the overly popular inflated genres
It'd be hereIf you could write a review for my story it would be much appreciated. Unfortunately, it is just under 10,000 words, but will go over that sometime tomorrow with a chapter update!
Thanks for your consideration. Not 100% sure if my signature is working so here it is https://www.scribblehub.com/series/531084/a-record-of-ash--ruin-the-grieving-lands/It'd be here
Chapter 5 – The rise
thaks a lot for the feedbackChapter 5 – The rise
4.5/5 : Great with a few flaws
The writings is good. It's expressive and nicely structured. Though, it's a bit complex. I believe with some editing you can elevate this greatly. Another thing is that I can't easily distinguish who's speaking from the family (except the MC). they all get jumbled up for me.
I'd have read more but this is really not my cup of tea, especially the reverse harem tag. Great work overall though.
Since most feedback threads are dead right now, andI'm trying to ignore/delay my responsibilitiesI have some free time, I decided on making my own.
This will be from the viewpoint of a simple-minded reader with an increasingly short attention span. I'll read until I lose interest.
Requirements:
Restrictions:
- 10k+ words
- Gender bender and all its subgenres (unless it's a genderless monster)
- Girls-love
- Boys-love
Highest ratings:
- The Stormcrow Cycle by @bokhi 4.5 / 5
- Kapal by @BenJepheneT 4.5 / 5
- The Supernatural Case of the Accidental Time Traveler by @Paul_Tromba 4 / 5
excludingI'm confused, are you saying you require it to be Gender Bender or you are excluding it?
First, I'm sorry I missed your post!I could need some feedback if I'm honest or just an opinion on what I should have done differently, but I've been too embarrassed to ask anyone till now so I might as well ask you All-knowing Blob.
Spatial magus, my novel is if I'm honest, your generic fantasy novel, at best and at worst my deranged thoughts.
I read the first 2-3 chapters and it's just a guy thay turns to a girl. sorry but no gb.My story isn't really Gender bender, so if you're willing to give it a look, I'd appreciate the feedback.
Anima Aliena
A starless sky lit by clouds, plants of every colour, and a once dead old man astounded by it all. Meeting an entity that he was too stupid to believe or comprehend, having his very soul tampered with, then waking up in a relatively tiny body that was very different...www.scribblehub.com
I couldn't read problem store.. not yet anyway. I've already gave my opinion on it a while back so that'll have to do for now. when i continue it again, I'll let you know what i think, either here or in a comment.I already got a pending work here but if it's allowed, here's a short story I posted recently. Under 3k+ words. Shouldn't take long.
The Home(less)sick Astronaut’s Best-of-Three
[Oneshot] A pair of astronauts finds a fresh crater on Mars, but so did a rival agency. The only way to settle their dispute is through a contest. Their arena of choice? A game of blackjack. Discord: https://discord.gg/aAuCwJkkrzwww.scribblehub.com
9. Drilling in the Basics – Part 2Would be glad to have the opinion of a grey blob on my story. It's ~80k words and the story is complete until I get to work on the second arc at some point in the near future. No romance or anything that you listed in your restrictions. o wo)b
Drunks & Fanatics
Freshly anointed cleric Tessa Vivuk aspires to be a Hero after having been saved by one as a child. But when she attempts to join the Heroes' Guild, the doors are shut on her. Unwilling to give up, she joins the Adventurers' Guild and believes she can earn enough recognition...www.scribblehub.com