Wanna honest review swap?

[GeorgeHaufman]

You give me review I give you review, we both get a review with some feedback.

I got Reincarnated and my System is kind of a jerk

The sun is shining, as Jason laid there. Not a single thing disturbed his relaxation. 'Wait I have abs?' Jason is in a world of surprise when he figures out that he got reincarnated. Who knows what awaits, overpowered skills, monsters, women, and most importantly-- fishing. _________...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[LelandLL]

I can check your story out and give you some feedback. In the meantime, can you check mines out? It is on the signature and add some comments and feedback.

 

[GeorgeHaufman]

I can check your story out and give you some feedback. In the meantime, can you check mines out? It is on the signature and add some comments and feedback.

I was thinking written review btw if you are cool with writing one

 

[WasatchWind]

You give me review I give you review, we both get a review with some feedback.

I got Reincarnated and my System is kind of a jerk

The sun is shining, as Jason laid there. Not a single thing disturbed his relaxation. 'Wait I have abs?' Jason is in a world of surprise when he figures out that he got reincarnated. Who knows what awaits, overpowered skills, monsters, women, and most importantly-- fishing. _________...

www.scribblehub.com

How much are you looking to do a review on? My story has four parts so far. I'll point out its also standard fantasy - being different from most content on the site, it may not be something you're a fan of. Also, that being my background, it will inform what I say in my own review.