Was reading something and the mc calls a girl "cute'' then there are two chapters of her basically freaking out

patbateman123x

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Well, they are adding words.
i wonder how many words the author could add if he touched her , or kissed her or worse had sex with her .
Son what are you reading ?
Just read 20000 words of a guy who had sex with a girl once . Yes that was the whole story
Lol over just that? The girl needs to touch some grass, she's way too sheltered
she needs the green hat
 

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Pretty much what the author of the devil is a part time did. His most hated books are the ones where the annoying character spends 2 books figuring out her emotions when it's pretty obvious what she should do. The plot does not get furthered in these books and it does nothing for the story as a whole.
 

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i wonder how many words the author could add if he touched her , or kissed her or worse had sex with her .
Son what are you reading ?
Just read 20000 words of a guy who had sex with a girl once . Yes that was the whole story

she needs the green hat
She needs a fat bastard to show her how to be a woman.

@BenJepheneT your time has come
 

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It sounds like she's neurodivergent.
 

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Dude/Girl need some fillers like Frieza takes 10 ep to blow the planet Namek to smithereens
 

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Dude/Girl need some fillers like Frieza takes 10 ep to blow the planet Namek to smithereens
3 episodes - she thinks misheard him
next 3 episodes - no i am not cute
next 3 episodes - wait did he really call me cute ?
finale - How can he say that ?
Jesus christ girl , its not like he fucking took your soul . Calm Down
She needs a fat bastard to show her how to be a woman.

@BenJepheneT your time has come
ugly bastards : my time has come
 

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With that much distress, I would guess that rather than the word "cute," she has an issue with the protagonist. Perhaps she witnessed his secret unique hobby offscreen.
 
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