Would love some feedback on my story!

Skroobs

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I just released 4 chapters so far (5 including prologue) and would like someone's thoughts on it so far! I think that I write a little bit better in the later chapters.
 
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Gladly. Although I think you could've named the main character a bit better...
 
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