Vhail
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Hi there,
I'm looking forsome feedback on the first chapter of a story I started to write no long ago. Here is the link :
First chapter
Please be aware that this is not the definitive edition of it since I might need some proof reading. Feel free to suggest website that I can use for correcting grammar and spelling.
I'm open to all comment unless it's free shittalk without argumentation.
I hope you guys enjoy it.
I'm looking forsome feedback on the first chapter of a story I started to write no long ago. Here is the link :
First chapter
Please be aware that this is not the definitive edition of it since I might need some proof reading. Feel free to suggest website that I can use for correcting grammar and spelling.
I'm open to all comment unless it's free shittalk without argumentation.
I hope you guys enjoy it.
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