RedHunter2296
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Hi there.
Writing my novel I thought about adding a character, a yandere. But the idea I have for the character is that the more time she spends with the protagonist she learns to control herself. The novel is mainly about action and organizations fighting each other. The protagonist then one day meets the yandere who was a friend of his in the past. He wants to help her to be more normal and she also tries to put that in the past. But I also want to make it clear that she really is bad in the head. She will help him in his adventures and the protagonist will try to keep her from getting out of control. By the end, I was thinking that she would end up afraid of hurting people who do not deserve it for fear that the protagonist hates her. Making her afraid of herself in the end.
My problem is how to write the character, how would she act in a way that is not so heavy so that readers think that she is the bad guy in the story, but at the same time that she is crazy enough to make it interesting?
Any advice is welcome, thanks.
Writing my novel I thought about adding a character, a yandere. But the idea I have for the character is that the more time she spends with the protagonist she learns to control herself. The novel is mainly about action and organizations fighting each other. The protagonist then one day meets the yandere who was a friend of his in the past. He wants to help her to be more normal and she also tries to put that in the past. But I also want to make it clear that she really is bad in the head. She will help him in his adventures and the protagonist will try to keep her from getting out of control. By the end, I was thinking that she would end up afraid of hurting people who do not deserve it for fear that the protagonist hates her. Making her afraid of herself in the end.
My problem is how to write the character, how would she act in a way that is not so heavy so that readers think that she is the bad guy in the story, but at the same time that she is crazy enough to make it interesting?
Any advice is welcome, thanks.